FIC: Untitled, Hermione/Luna, No Challenge

[wasureneba]

Pairing: Hermione/Luna
Word Count: 2,961
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Discussion of the Cruciatus curse
Summary: The year that Voldemort was defeated, Hermione discovers a few things about herself. One of them is that she likes Luna Lovegood.
Author's Notes: Originally an attempt for Otter and Ferret(!) using the prompt "The year that Voldemort was

Comments

[evening12]

This story of your is delicious. Believable. I can believe that Hermione would fall for Luna. I think what I might love best about your story is that Hermione loving Luna is always at the edge of the story, always present but at the same time it's not a story about Hermione loving Luna. It's more a story of Hermione finding herself after the war.

[wasureneba]

Martine, thanks so much for this comment. I'm so very glad that it was believable, and that the lovestory-in-a-warstory came out!

[nearlyconscious]

I love Martine's feedback ; indeed, this is not a lovestory but it includes a lovestory.
I loved the progression, the format of the story.
Your attention to details is compelling ; "Cruciatus was a hard-sounding word, the ragged harshness of k and the hiss of s and the explosion tus."
How adorable for Ron to offer roses with still a bit of blood on them, too ^-^ That made me smile, I thought it was very much IC.
Overall there are so many things I liked about this that it'd be hard to point out all of them. Kudos!!
AND YAY FOR INTERHOUSE LOVE + FEMSLASH which is one of my favourite things

[wasureneba]

Thanks, Delphine. <3 I'm really glad that you enjoyed some of those details! The ones you picked out (the sound of Cruciatus and Ron offering the still-bloody roses) were two of my favorite things to write. :)

And interhouse femslash, needs moaaaar

[nearlyconscious]

:) Agreed, we need more interhouse femslash... I wonder when is the next round at interhouse-fest? I had a blast last year.