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hg_silverlining challenge fic -- G -- Forever Dreaming

Jul 24, 2009 14:12

I could stay awake just to hear you breathing

Watch you smile while you are sleeping

While you’re far away dreaming

I could spend my life in this sweet surrender

I could stay lost in this moment forever

Summary: Harry and Ginny take a moment for themselves on a stressful day.

Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

dukebrymin July 24 2009, 02:33:22 UTC

Very peaceful, very calming. I liked, especially, the part about Ginny touching his scar.

Using the present tense is always fraught with peril--you did it very well, and it added to the immediateness of the piece.

Thanks!

rumpelsnorcack July 24 2009, 04:56:19 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't sure about the present tense but it wrote itself that way and I did want that feeling of immediacy :)

katwoman_68 July 24 2009, 05:36:20 UTC

I enjoyed this. I liked how Ginny just knew when to pull him from the crowds. It really shows that although he saved the wizarding world, she is the one who takes care of him.

Very nice.

rumpelsnorcack July 24 2009, 09:44:02 UTC

Thank you. I always think that even though in this moment she's the one looking after him, that he would look after her exactly the same way when she needs it. He would know when to pull her away too, I think.

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rumpelsnorcack July 24 2009, 09:45:24 UTC

Thank you. I love the song too. One of my friends was so excited when I told her what my lyrics were.

pluschi July 24 2009, 09:01:56 UTC

Beautiful song and beautiful fic.
I like how you seemed to capture time and emotions so simply - without using too many words or too little.
You've written a Ginny that knows how Harry ticks but also a Harry that let's her do it. I like that *g*

rumpelsnorcack July 24 2009, 09:47:02 UTC

Thank you. I like that they both know how the other ticks. It's one of the things that stuck out most strongly for me in the books.

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rumpelsnorcack July 24 2009, 19:52:29 UTC

Thank you so much :) While I understand the impulse to sneak away and go at it like rabbits, I really just don't think they would in this situation. But I guess that's because of how I envisage their HBP relationship, and everyone will see those 'particularly happy' hours differently :)