Gift for stupidhero - The little box at the bottom of the drawer [1/2]

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Title: The little box at the bottom of the drawer [1/2]
Gift for: stupidhero
Author: st_dl
Pairing: Harry/Ginny; Ron/Hermione. Mention of other canon couples.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4196
Summary: Ginny's life is perfect. She has a wonderful family, a nice boyfriend and she's a damn good chaser. But deep inside, something is missing and it's time to change it

Comments

[luna_plath]

I really enjoyed this first part. Even though a long separation is unusual in H/G fic, I think it's an interesting way to work with the characters. Ginny's voice feels very established, and I could totally see Harry being all moody and hard to deal with. Good work so far! Can't wait for part 2.

[mollywheezy]

Great start! I love your characterization of Ron and his relationship with Ginny. I also felt really sorry for Ginny when Gwenog gave her a talking-to. And lol at Ginny's thoughts about her tart. ;)

[cwarbeck]

Hee - this promises to be loads of fun. I always enjoy H/G at cross-purposes before finally getting together.

[aperfectsong]

The voice feels really good and honest. I love H/G stories that begin with a long separation for some reason. I like to think Ginny has her own life somewhere. This just fits so well together. Great job! Onto the next chapter---