The Guardian's Secret 21/?

[hezikiah]

Title: The Guardian's Secret 20/?
Author: Hezikiah
Disclaimer: Not mine, the BBC's.
Rating: PG
Characters: Ella (OC), Donna, Eighth Doctor, Tenth Doctor, Healer Koray (OC), Healer Akakios (OC)
Warnings: None
Summary: Sequel to " Witnessing the Protector," five years on. When the metacrisis begins to unravel on its own, a desperate Ella finds the

Comments

[tkel_paris]

I have chills down my spine now. What more could happen before things really go to hell is both something I want to know and something I don't. But... curiosity wins out every time.

Is the rest of the story going well? Is the path to the end clear or getting there?

Be well. (And I tagged you on FB for something AWESOME!)

[hezikiah]

It's going as well as can be expected. I know how the story ends and I know the big events leading up to that...it's just getting from here to there and keeping the momentum going. I think that's what the real challenge of this story is.

[dm12]

Wow, it's a good thing Ella decided to take a walk in the fog! I really don't like Nevisth, but there seems to be a very real issue of long-term survival for the baby, and in the process of saving Donna, they may have unwittingly caused the fetus harm. Sigh... things can never be easy, can they? And they are basically planning to keep Donna institutionalized, out of the public eye, it seems. Well, I hope they can save the baby, and get Donna, Ella and the baby out of there....

And even Koray-toaster is getting upset with her cousin... her anger might be very real, but Time Lords (at least "proper" Time Lords) don't seem to express it the same way humans do.

And Donna is still having some memory issues, I see. At least she has the sense to not fight too much about it right now. It could do more harm to everyone.

Shaun as a Time Lord... that made me crack up! That and Donna referring to the Doctor once again as a "daft Spaceman."