An Apple a Day

[heyheyyouyou]

An Apple a Day

Over the past few years, the Apple Company has come out with an assortment of products appealing to the masses of people around the world.  One of the leading providers of personal entertainment, new products are introduced frequently.  It seems like almost daily there is something new and exciting appearing on the

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[gettingoveryou_]

I honestly enjoyed reading this, very true, I have definitely given into the whole Apple world domination thing. Maybe throw in something about how real conversation is being replaced with iPods? And I like the iToilet thing. :D

New and improved versions with longer lasting batteries, color screens, different prices, and more have been released, giving people more options.
This sentence could be reworded a bit, maybe to 'new and improved versions offer more options with longer lasting batteries, color screens, different prices and more.'

Want music? There is an Apple product for that. Need to call a friend or check your e-mail? There is an Apple product for that.
I did something like this in a paper once and was told to not repeat sentences to make a point. Maybe my professor was just weird, but I don't know.

[heyheyyouyou]

haha i think you have a good point. thanks for the help and for looking over it and actually enjoying it haha!! :) i'm going to revise it...but tomorrow when i've gotten some sleep ;)

i'm gonna have more articles soon, so make sure to check them out!

[heyheyyouyou]

i edited it a little in those places if you want to check it out!!

[apathetic_way]

AVRIL O RLY???????????????????????

Panic! was beyond awesome btw.

[heyheyyouyou]

haha yes avril! i freaking loveeee that song.

and i hate you.

a lot.