it's always darkest before the dawn

Jun 04, 2012 17:53

it's always darkest before the dawn
zhou mi/sungmin ; kyuhyun/zhou mi, super junior.
3,393 words, nc-17.
summary: zhou mi falls in love (slowly and gracefully) and feels the holes kyuhyun bores in his back.

Have you ever thought about giving up? )

fandom: super junior, rating: nc-17, pairing: zhou mi/sungmin, pairing: kyuhyun/zhou mi

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fonulyn June 4 2012, 16:43:49 UTC
aaa why so angsty ;--; ah I have a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes now!

it's wonderfully written! ♥

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16littleseconds June 4 2012, 21:27:05 UTC
/hands you a tissue

thanks a lot! ♥

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16littleseconds June 4 2012, 21:30:10 UTC
- the love you have for him - it smothers and grows and just, ah.
ugh my love for zhou mi, nana, we could talk about it for h o u r s i swear. and i'm pretty much sure we have similar feelings about this ;__;

- working on something for the playlist, will post it tomorrow~~

- ... i know what you mean. i myself nearly cried while writing some passages and then had to add some bits and pieces of fluff (....... okay the only fluff i can find in this is the taiwan moment :|) to feel better lmao the adequate adjective might be bittersweet? idk.

- you're welcome bb! ♥

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16littleseconds June 4 2012, 21:59:00 UTC
mhhh well i used bittersweet because even in the happier moments you can still feel the sadness? idk it's like even with the ~happier ending you can still feel that they've come a long way and you can still the sadness lingering on? but that's my point of view!! i'm really curious about these layers you're talking about ;__;

... okay okay i give up i cannot do fluff, i can only do angst and breaking ships and characters T___T

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apple_of_my June 4 2012, 19:59:11 UTC
i think i might have wanted to cry at some point and i couldn't figure out wether it was because they were all heartbreaking morons and needed to talk it out, once and for all, or because your writing was just that good.
and i like mimin so much, too.
so. ♥

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16littleseconds June 4 2012, 21:32:26 UTC
omg thank you so much for the compliment about my writing ;__;
mimin is such a rare pairing yet it's one of my favorites!

thanks again! ♥

and i crept up on your profile and noticed you're french. hi there o/

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apple_of_my June 5 2012, 05:45:14 UTC
the mimin dynamics have so much potential, yet i've read so few good fics :( it's a shame.

i am french, yes! (you lurk on commenters' profiles too? :D) where are you from?

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16littleseconds June 5 2012, 13:59:04 UTC
(replying here or else you'll never get the notif since your last comment appears to be anon;;)

ikr :( doesn't help that they barely have any interactions these days ;__;

i do lurk on commenters' profiles yup :DD parisian suburbs, 92 to be precise! and you? :)
i never thought i'd find someone french in the english-speaking kpop ficdom, wow.s

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bonchan24 June 4 2012, 20:31:17 UTC
it's good mimin ^^

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16littleseconds June 5 2012, 08:41:41 UTC
thank you :)

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tariana June 4 2012, 21:29:57 UTC
Not "my" pairing (Kyumin) but glad I ventured over here to read this anyway! Very nicely done!

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16littleseconds June 5 2012, 08:42:10 UTC
i'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless then! thanks a lot for reading and commenting :D

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