Atlantis fic

[heygirlie]

ZOMG, finally done! This has taken me two months. All the way from conception to self-editing to getting it beta'd... DONE. I'm almost afraid to move on to my other WIP fics... all of them are supposed to be long. *gulp

Comments

[jakisbishlygay]

OMG!!! You were brilliant with Ronon in this!!!

And Teyla with the Zena!!

That was perfect, you get two thumbs up! (see how I tied it in to the.. oh, nevermind, no one understand my brilliant humor)

*iz ded*

[heygirlie]

Aww, two thumbs up! For once in my life, I get it.

I'm happy you liked it, I did try and make sure Ronon and Teyla got equal screen time. And of course Teyla knows about Xena. That black top she's wearing nowadays? Not a coincidence.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

[burntcopper]

:snicker: And this is why I buy my sweets outside the cinema, take my own water, and only buy ice cream there.

(Is actually waiting for Devil Wears Prada to hit these shores)

[heygirlie]

Indeed. I bring all my own food to the theater. Although I work there, so they let me get away with more.

Do check out Devil Wears Prada when it hits the UK! You and lemonbella, you must experience the shallow thrills of a predictable plot with human and clothing eye candy alike. :)

[somedaybitch]

much fun. :D

one tiny quibble; "...after having gelled and styled to artistically mussed perfection..."

Joe's hair does that naturally.

[heygirlie]

Joe's hair does that naturally.

Ah, the Flan... is there nothing about him that is not naturally hot? *g*

[somedaybitch]

i don't think so, gawd help us.

[somedaybitch]

also...:::waves frantically to Hooverphonic fan:::

[fydyan]

I laughed out loud, and boy did I need that! I can totally see this happening, just this way - the characterization worked fabulously, for all of them. Thanks for the laughs!

[heygirlie]

You are most welcome for the laughs! Good to know the fic had the intended result and not, well, something else. ^_^ And that you liked the characterization.

Thanks for your feedback.

[larianelensar]

That was way cute! I enjoyed it a lot. (Though they really should have gone for Pirates.) *hee*

[heygirlie]

I'm glad you liked it.

I wasn't quite ready to tackle the story of the team watching PotC. 2+ hours... Johnny Depp... Keira Knightley... undead monkey... there would have been a great bit in there where on screen the three male leads are fighting like lil' boys and Keira is fed up, and Teyla would be all, 'WOMAN, I GET YOU.'

I do hope someone does fic/art for tomorrow's Talk Like a Pirate Day. :)