(Well, okay, my OCD is like "commas before quotation marks," but seriously. It's too hot to complain.)
(Also, I knew there was a reason I liked that picture--besides the um blackwork black hair black eyes black courduroy omg--and now I know what it is. Hands! Wrists! Elbows! Thank you ever so.)
Ok, I am apparently blind because I cannot find this! But you know how it is with stuff you've written, sometimes, where you...it would be "can't see the trees for the forest" I suppose. But the quotation mark is my punctuation nemesis, so I don't doubt you.
Also, thank you! Also, it is a nice picture, right? And he has very, very nice fingers.
Pete says “I have a meeting. After lunch. I should go.”
There should be a comma after "says" there--and in every case. Granted, I've just realised that you're telling us how the story would/will go, so it could be all postmodern and shit, which blah. Don't even get me started on how postmodernism breaks my brain by making me feel dumb when I don't notice it happening.
I love commas! And semi-colons! And dashes! If you hadn't noticed!
I agree totally about the tie and cufflinks, although I'm not sure I did the hotness justice (I'm not sure anything short of actually watching it happen in front of me would do it justice). And thanks so much!
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Um. No.
(Well, okay, my OCD is like "commas before quotation marks," but seriously. It's too hot to complain.)
(Also, I knew there was a reason I liked that picture--besides the um blackwork black hair black eyes black courduroy omg--and now I know what it is. Hands! Wrists! Elbows! Thank you ever so.)
(One last thing: oh Patrick. *swoon*)
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Ok, I am apparently blind because I cannot find this! But you know how it is with stuff you've written, sometimes, where you...it would be "can't see the trees for the forest" I suppose. But the quotation mark is my punctuation nemesis, so I don't doubt you.
Also, thank you! Also, it is a nice picture, right? And he has very, very nice fingers.
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Pete says “I have a meeting. After lunch. I should go.”
There should be a comma after "says" there--and in every case. Granted, I've just realised that you're telling us how the story would/will go, so it could be all postmodern and shit, which blah. Don't even get me started on how postmodernism breaks my brain by making me feel dumb when I don't notice it happening.
I love commas! And semi-colons! And dashes! If you hadn't noticed!
Lovely fingers. I love hands with character.
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<3
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But thank you!
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