[Fic Fill] Four Mojito Mixer

[abarero]

TITLE: Four Mojito Mixer
AUTHOR/ARTIST: abarero
RECIPIENT: viola_player
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: Cuba/Canada, France/Seychelles, France/Canada, in short: Cuba/Canada/France/Seychelles (and all pairs therein at least somewhat)
RATING: PG-13 for implied sex and well, France.
NOTES: Popping my OT3/4 writing cherry. Ohgod.
SUMMARY: But Cuba's laid-back view was a bit shaken

Comments

[pantstacular]

I cannot say enough how much I love you for writing this. Seriously. I didn’t think this would ever get written and then you did it and made it so so amazing. I loved that you did this from Cuba’s POV it worked so well from this angle. I really liked the bit at the beginning when he was talking about France and Canada’s relationship and how he was just glad that he was noticed and Canada was happy. The fact that you also spent time on each of the different pairings was awesome. Not just the bigger ones, but dude Cuba and Seychelles’ slumber party? The two of them are strangely adorable together. And everyone was so IC. France at his most Francelike self. (AND FRANCE COOKING! I am SO glad you had that in there…) I mean he like greeted them by groping. And Seychelles being sweet and cute but standing up for herself was so well done. And Canada being so rightfully and adorably fail. Like when he fell asleep in the car. Oh Canada. And of course Cuba was just perfect, and he is really rather adorable

[abarero]

I am so pleased you liked it! I had a lot of fun actually planning this out, and I'm excited to see little tidbits (like the Island nation slumber party) were something that not only did I enjoy it- but you did too.

Just...♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[sakuratsukikage]

This is . . . amazing. It would have been easy to lose track of the characters or give one of them not enough focus, or any number of issues that would come up when writing so many characters in a relationship with each other, but you completely rocked it, seriously. I was really impressed by how well you captured all of their personalities, and how you sold on me on this as a foursome that would really work, no matter how wary I was at first. I came away from reading it with a gigantic grin on my face. Just an incredible job, really.

I also really liked how you didn't focus on sex at all, even though it was obviously going on, instead focusing more on the personality logistics of all four of them, and the emotions, and all the rest of it. I thought it really added something to the fic.

I loved this. ♥ ♥ ♥ Really. :D Great job.

[abarero]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad I managed to sell the foursome since this is my first time writing such a thing. Just...thank you :)

[kasumicc]

*reverences* TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE ONESHOT MONSTERS. YES? YES?

I love your Seychelles, I really do. And why so cute, Cuba!!!! ♥
And the comment about 'sex on the beach' deeply amused me xD

You really, really managed to show a OT4. You gave enough time to every character, and what's more, you managed to make them all interact with each other! It didn't looked rushed at all, you kept a nice pace. The tropical setting helped a lot xD

I don't think I can praise it enough. So yes; feel proud of yourself ♥

[abarero]

If I could capture that ability in a bottle and sell it, I would XD

Thank you so so much! I'm so pleased you liked it (and my silly 'sex on the beach' joke XD)

[amoyr]

I must confess I was a bit apprehensive about reading at first, but I'm so glad I did ♥ You did such a wonderful job, everything just flows and fits so nicely, and I think I'm falling love with your characterization of Cuba. This is just wonderfully written~~~

[abarero]

Well, that's all right! I was pretty apprehensive about writing it to be honest XD Just, thank you so much! (and yes, Cuba's such a sweetheart past his gruffiness) XD

[tanya_tsuki]

I have to admit, I never even considered this particular pairing before. I think you did it justice, though, and it was wonderful to read :D

[abarero]

Thanks so much~! :)