For love and for money, Part 1

[sweetjerry]

Author: Emi sweetjerry
Pairing: No pairing atm
Characters: Feliciano (Veneziano), Veronique/Alaka  (Seychelles), Tolys (Lithuania), Lovino (Romano), Angélica (Portugal), Francis Bonnefoy (France), Antonio Carriedo (Spain)
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Mention of slavery, mentions of sexual assault/sexual slavery
Parts: I wrote an AU oneshot in the kink meme

Comments

[vampirenaomi]

I read the previous fic on the meme and loved it, and this was great, too! I really like Veronique's POV and especially your portrayal of Feliciano as someone who is so innocent and clueless that he borders on offensive. I can't wait to see where this will lead.

[sweetjerry]

Thank you so much <3 I tried to balance Feliciano's utter lack of menace with the fact that ignorance can be just as offensive, and I'm glad I've seemed to manage. I'm working on part 2 right now, and hopefully I'll be able to finish it soon ^^

[dualce]

I followed you here from the kink meme too, and yay! Glad you're continuing this! Your writing is really lovely but unique to each character. I like your portrayal of Seychelles, she's intelligent but the straightforward way she accepts her position as a slave in life makes for an interesting mix. I can't wait to see the rest of the characters! Particularly Lithuania, and I'm not sure if that's because I have such a fondness for him or because I'm really interested in seeing his and South Italy's interaction. But I'm looking forward to more of your writing!

[sweetjerry]

Thank you so much! I'm having too much fun with this concept to quit just yet, I've always been a sucker for trying to portray characters in an AU setting and trying to still keep the original character intact. And the next part, which is up now, has more or less exactly what you wanted to see, so I hope you'll like it <3