[fanfic] Puerto Rico & Taiwan - "Kuya, Hermano, & Oni-san"

[damagectrl]

Title: Puerto Rico & Taiwan - Kuya, Hermano, &Oni-san
Part: One Shot
Characters: OCPiri, OCPuerto Rico, Taiwan,Vietnam, Japan, Mexico, & some America
Pairings: Misguided attempt at being cupid x Puerto Rico & Taiwan
Warnings: PG+13, Implied Adult Situations, OC Warning, randomness, stupidity, unbetated mind-dribble!! READ AT OWN RISK.
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[silentside]

YAY JUAN \o/
yes we need more juan ;u;

oh the pirihon, is this the one you mentioned to me earlier o:

[damagectrl]

Yep, that's the Pirihon I sent to you earlier. I sent you a summary of my possibly necrophilic idea. O_o

[crossesandguns]

WHAT THE- I didn't expect Juan at the end! LOL, hahaha XD Now I think of him as sort of a Playboy boss, the ones who drink wine and stuff while scantily clad women fap over him 8D.b

Yes, we need more Juan. Hmmm.

[damagectrl]

Thank you for reading! The clues were in there! X3

Someone needs to draw playboy!Juan. (The thought makes me giggle.) XD

[dalisay_17]

WAIT WAIT WAIT.

So let me get this right- the ending was a TRIO?! As in, Anh Linh, Maria and Juan? IN BED?! TOGETHER?!?! 0______o I don't mind that- It's just baffling.

That aside- OH GAWD THAT WAS SO AWESOME. You can do serious- AND YOU HAVE REALLY COOL CRACK FICS, TOO. XDXDXDXDXD Thanks for making my day! Greatly! (You have a handful of typos there. That's understandable, seeing the length and the amount of time you allot for your fics.)

[damagectrl]

Thank you for reading!

Yes, it was a 3some. Yes, Anh Linh, Juan, and Maria. LOL

I'm not done yet, either. I still need to finish writing the PiriRomano and the first part of the Pirihon. D:

3 things influence my typos more than anything:
- how fast I rush through the story (as in this case)
- how fast I type (100+ words per minute) in comparison to my train of thought
- how long my nails are (I grew them out and am having a hard time adjusting to one of my laptops at home. -_-" Lately, there have been more typos than normal.... :|)

[malea_delacruz]

That was so funny.... And I never thought that Juan would be the one in the end..... But I did see the hints, (you know about the Tatay thingy when the triplets their Tatay needed the chair, LOL)

All in all, awesome job.

comment hacking sorry!

[vivalalixi]

eh? i thought they were talking about spain there?

Re: comment hacking sorry!

[damagectrl]

WWWRRROOONNNNNGGGGG

Remember that Spain is outside with England at that point. :3

[damagectrl]

Thank you for reading!

Yes, the Tatay thing was one. In the beginning, Maria says 'we can hear you' and then a reference to an LJ Comm and fanfiction which were used in my last Juan-related fic. Mexico also says they were talking at one point and Puerto Rico stresses for him to talk to MARIA. Lastly, Japan was being told what the dishes were by Juan. :)

Hehehe, I'm glad you got them!

[vivalalixi]

OMGWTHISJUANDOINGTHAAAARRRR?!?!?! <-- can u read that? :D

srsly, lol i should have seen it coming. the mentions of the comm. the fics. oh goodness america writing smut. i should have seen it. JUAN.

oh goodie. birthdays! X3

i love ana and mei's interaction here. tho ana always gets the better of her. and mei's kinda fixated on piri's boobs.
goodness. love the crack to break the DE tension from th 12th chap. X3

awesome job!

[damagectrl]

Thank you for reading!

UKNOWHUTJUANISDOINGTHAR! (And yes, I was able to read it.)

LOL, there were a few hints. :)

Ana is used to competing with her siblings, so she's good with the tension. Mei's love of Piri's boobs is a little joke; she's not as endowed and finds them fascinating. A lot of people actually do that.