[fanfic] Harsh Realization

May 18, 2010 17:30

Title: Harsh Realization
Part:  SUPER SHORT One-Shot (SSOS…sauce?)
Characters: OCPhilippines, Australia, Bente’s Leste, Spain, Vietnam, & extended family etc.
Pairings: Piri x Aussie(?)
Warnings: PG-13, Randomness, OC Warning, Un-betaed Mind Dribble
Summary: She was older than Leste.  Years…no, centuries older.  So why did a child-nation who’s idea ( Read more... )

char: australia, oc: philippines, fanfiction, char: vietnam, oc: timor-leste, author - damagectrl, char: spain

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epalpie May 19 2010, 06:09:08 UTC
Ooh~~ I like where this is going! Can't wait for more.

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damagectrl May 19 2010, 15:43:54 UTC
Hehehe...thank you very much for reading! We'll see were it goes from here. :D

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silentside May 19 2010, 06:25:01 UTC
I'm sorry for ruining bananas and tomatoes for you D:
(Think of it as...having a diet! /shot)

Pointless dribbles are fun (but srsly, this is awesome)

"He is a fine specimen of a man" *hands down to Antonio*

I can imagine him sparkling. Poor england XDDD

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damagectrl May 19 2010, 15:45:22 UTC
He was sparkling...*A* That image is now in my head. England was traumatized.

Yes, they are really fun to write. It's like a free-for-all. :3

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bente_unerz36 May 19 2010, 08:51:17 UTC
So loving Vietnam here!! xDDD she had a pretty imagination.

“Yes, ‘nice’,” her sister muttered knowingly. “So, how long as he been there, being ‘nice’?” she asked smoothly.

“Oh…I like where this is going…,” Vietnam’s voice grew more curious. “And then you took him to that storage shed in the corner of your garden and…?”

“Yes, it’s so horrible being you,” she said dully. “Being in a house filled with gorgeous, half-naked men, having a gorgeous brother, a gorgeous father, all while having a gorgeous continent going after you after years of repressed love.”

I love those part!! xDDD and the banana incident... Piri... why so naughty? xDDD good thing Leste are THAT naive!! xDDDDDDD
keep up! I want to see what Luzon's going to do with Papa xDDD

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damagectrl May 19 2010, 15:48:05 UTC
:3 Thank you very much for reading!

Ah, Vietnam seemed the prim and proper and angry type at first, but I thought she'd be the kind with a somewhat pervy side...I mean...she as part of FRENCH-IndoChina. :shifty eyes:

I, too, would like to see what Luzon would do, but more so, I'd like to see what secretly-a-mama's-boy Mindanao will do. :3

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crossesandguns May 19 2010, 11:43:33 UTC
CUTE! I love this semi-series kinda thing. Very funny XD

Vietnam as an onee-sama was a nice (and unexpected) touch! I've always thought of her as more ladylike and shy than Piri, but her character here works better! takes note of it for the future ♥

Aww at Antonio getting his (already big) ego stroked.

LuzViMinda! Are they supposed to be Piri's sons here? If then who is the father? A bigger mystery than Leste's origins, haha

Excited for more!

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damagectrl May 19 2010, 15:50:24 UTC
Thank you for reading!!!

I also always thought of her as more ladylike than Piri, but I can't help but think she has a very sharp edge to her. I'm not sure exactly how to describe her...

LOL, yes, Antonio couldn't be prouder of his daughter's 'taste in men'.

Yep, they're supposed to be Piri's sons here. I thought about the father thing last night after I posted it and I've come to a conclusion that I'll write in should this randomness continue. :3 Hehehe...

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yukihiro826 May 19 2010, 12:41:03 UTC
Oh My!! Papa Spain Approves XD

Im so Happy XD AFter the beating on Australia he welcomed him with open arms for Piri XD

I wonder what would the other suitors will be like after they have known that spain accepted australia
and I can imagine Aussie's expression after he realize his great Luck XD

I Love YOU

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damagectrl May 19 2010, 15:51:47 UTC
Spain is crazy like that. XD

I think the other suitors would be horrified and Aussie would be surprised, but then greatly elated. Of course, there is still her brother and now her sons to get through. :3

Thank you for reading!!! ♥

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