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[Fic] First Among Equals

Aug 12, 2010 09:33

Title: First Among Equals
Rating: PG13
Characters: America, France and China make a cameo, human OC
Summary: America looks after his future, as best he can. This was originally for the prompt “Nations can have human friends too”, and also inspired by this.
Notes: So this is self indulgent three am writing, flawed, and if I start apologizing for ( Read more... )

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Comments 22

emelethaine August 13 2010, 15:17:26 UTC

I love love love your OC. <3 She's so this and that and argh it was just one little oneshot but--

I might be shipping CamillaxAmerica now.
Your fic is amazing, the nation-human interactions beautiful, and the lines. Just. So. Epic. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

talkjive August 13 2010, 16:39:26 UTC

Oh, man, thanks, that was the part that worried me the most, that people were going to hate Cam. I'm glad she worked out!

gisho August 15 2010, 18:41:13 UTC

Belatedly: oh man this is AWESOME ( ... )

talkjive August 16 2010, 16:21:31 UTC

Oh man. /presses hands to blushing face You're so sweet, thank you! I'm glad it was clear that, underneath the dick jokes, there actually was a good deal of srs bsns going on. And when I first got into Hetalia, America being a big blond dude annoyed me to no end, ffff every time I get to write him in the future he looks different. /author tract

tomby56 August 15 2010, 22:58:08 UTC

Ahh my God that was so awesome. <33 Just, everything, the whole story, so amazing. I wish I could elaborate, but I really just loved every bit of it. /incoherency

talkjive August 16 2010, 01:23:32 UTC

I'm so glad! I was really worried about this one, I'm happy you liked it.

caramelsapples August 16 2010, 13:22:45 UTC

Oh My God! This has to be the best hetalia OC I've ever read about! She was cool and real! I mean she seemed like a real person I could just imagine it!

The way you write Alfred is amazing, that should be canon! I love this whole thing to pieces!

talkjive August 16 2010, 16:22:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I was so worried everyone was going to hate Cam, I'm glad people don't.

lokichan2004 December 30 2010, 05:46:32 UTC

Ok, so I'm super late. But this was amazing. I loved every word. Camila is a great OC; I'd like to see more of her, if you haven't done so already.

...I read all of Yao's lines in Mr. Wong's voice, from Futurama. XD