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anonymous
July 9 2009, 02:46:24 UTC
When he finally circled all the way around the boy, coming back behind him, he brought the whip forward with no preamble, and it lashed against the Latvian's back, a red welt appearing instantly across the scarred, but still nice and smooth in certain parts, skin. Raivis screamed out in surprise and pain. No matter how many times you went through something like this, you never properly remembered the pain until it happened again
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anonymous
July 13 2009, 20:45:48 UTC
Suddenly, Ivan, who up until now had seemed fairly calm as he was walking up the stairs with the two, took hold of both the Baltics by their arms and shoved them over to their older brother's bed. His normal bright, cheery, if quite creepy, smile was gone, replaced by a look of anger. The boys collapsed on the bed, too worn out to even attempt to fight it. If Eduard had not known before what the Russian was planning, he certainly did now, and a look of horror crossed his face. He had been naive enough to think that whatever Ivan had planned next couldn't possibly be any worse than the beating they had just lived through. He obviously had a lot to learn
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anonymous
July 13 2009, 21:00:00 UTC
I really like that detail, where Raivis rescues the glasses... Just the fact that you thought of that...
And somehow this makes me really sad, not only for the Baltics but even more for Russia who so extremely can't tell others feelings or earn any real affection.
Ahaha, I'm glad you liked that. This anon is a former glasses-wearing, now a contact-wearing, anon, and I always freaked out about my glasses when they weren't on my face, so I never really forget about how it feels to not have them safe. :) Even though my vision is nowhere near as bad as I imagine Eduard's to be, I can relate to him.
Yeah, things like this always make me sad for Russia too, and I was hoping that would come out in my story, so I'm glad it did, because I don't see him as just a mindless rapetruck. I've always thought he has motives, reasons, for being how he is. And I'm always saddened by how he can't seem to figure out how to have a meaningful relationship. D:
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anonymous
July 13 2009, 21:52:32 UTC
[[Wow, I am so much quicker at writing porn...and rape...I almost feel bad for how much quicker I get to it if it has those...D:]]
Raivis wanted to close his eyes, try to block out the sight of his brother about to get raped, but no matter how much he hated it, there was a sick part of him that found it enthralling. Maybe it was from living with Ivan for so long that the Russian's own perversities had rubbed off on him, but he couldn't help but keep on watching. Which, he was sure, was precisely what Ivan intended by having them both at the same time
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anonymous
July 13 2009, 21:56:49 UTC
[[Well, now that this is longer than 10 parts, this is officially author!anon's longest fanfic ever! And I'm not seeing any sign of this ending any time soon, either. Also, I really wanted this paragraph with part 10...but it didn't fit...D:]]
Ivan sat back and glanced at both his remaining Baltics, naked and oh so beautiful on the bed with him. Yes...the sight really was picturesque. Only one thing could make it better, and that would be if their brother was here, too, to join in. That would be pretty great. Ivan would like that a lot. As soon as Toris came back (Ivan had not doubt of this fact; Alfred couldn't remain as strong as he was forever. Someday, he would slip up, and Ivan would be there, ready and waiting to take his precious Toris back from that thief), Ivan would have to make sure to include him on some family fun, as well. After he taught him a lesson on not leaving, of course. He couldn't allow those terrible ideas to remain in Toris's head any longer. And he was sure that perhaps even at this very moment, Alfred was
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anonymous
July 13 2009, 22:56:14 UTC
Eduard was leaning his head back against the wall, the coolness a terribly small bit of comfort. However small the comfort, he tried his best to focus on it, instead of the revolting things happening to his little brother right next to him. He couldn't see them properly without his glasses, which he counted as a blessing, but he could still hear them perfectly fine, and it disgusted him
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anonymous
July 14 2009, 01:32:57 UTC
Raivis watched in sickening fascination as his brother was prepared. He had a horribly selfish thought for a second, one that he quickly squashed, but it didn't die as easily as he wished it would. He...he was actually a bit glad he wasn't going first. It was terrible, horrible, he hated himself just for thinking it, even for a second. But...it hurt so badly when Ivan raped you...he was so big, bigger than Raivis could handle. But, of course, handle it he did. With an overwhelming amount of pain, yes, but he'd taken it before and would probably take it again, probably tonight, because the Latvian held no illusions that Ivan would just go on and screw Eduard and then be done. No, if that was how it was, he wouldn't have bothered undressing Raivis. If the Latvian boy was just intended to be a spectator, Ivan would have left him alone after the beating was done
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anonymous
July 14 2009, 04:49:10 UTC
First thing in the morning: Getting online and hoping that this story has another chapter. Oh my, I'm so addicted.
I love how both brothers react to each other's torment, and how Raivis feels guilty every time that he has slightly negative feelings towards either one of his brothers.
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anonymous
July 14 2009, 16:03:01 UTC
Ivan continued to thrust his length in and out of Eduard, and, after a long while, the boy's sobs slowed; his pained mewls quieted. Ivan had been expecting this, and was glad it had finally happened. The Estonian's noises were really starting to get on his nerves. Of course it was going to hurt; did he have to make such a big deal out of it? They'd played this game before, and Eduard made the same sorts of noises each time. Ivan, who truly was rather childlike in his thoughts and ideas, didn't understand this. Even Toris had stopped sounding like this after enough times...of course, he had told him he really didn't like those sorts of noises, so that may have had an effect on that...Toris really was a good boy, sometimes
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anonymous
July 17 2009, 22:56:41 UTC
Sorry for the delay in putting up the next part of this. Real life is eating me. D: I'm not sure if I'll get a chance to be on the computer this weekend, but I will try my hardest, and there will definately be more of this on Monday if not. :)
Don't rush, Rl is always way more important, and I think you're doing not only a really good but also really fast job here. A couple of days won't kill anyone, I hope.
I'll still be waiting like mad, but you really don't need to feel under pressure too much XD
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And somehow this makes me really sad, not only for the Baltics but even more for Russia who so extremely can't tell others feelings or earn any real affection.
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Yeah, things like this always make me sad for Russia too, and I was hoping that would come out in my story, so I'm glad it did, because I don't see him as just a mindless rapetruck. I've always thought he has motives, reasons, for being how he is. And I'm always saddened by how he can't seem to figure out how to have a meaningful relationship. D:
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Raivis wanted to close his eyes, try to block out the sight of his brother about to get raped, but no matter how much he hated it, there was a sick part of him that found it enthralling. Maybe it was from living with Ivan for so long that the Russian's own perversities had rubbed off on him, but he couldn't help but keep on watching. Which, he was sure, was precisely what Ivan intended by having them both at the same time ( ... )
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Ivan sat back and glanced at both his remaining Baltics, naked and oh so beautiful on the bed with him. Yes...the sight really was picturesque. Only one thing could make it better, and that would be if their brother was here, too, to join in. That would be pretty great. Ivan would like that a lot. As soon as Toris came back (Ivan had not doubt of this fact; Alfred couldn't remain as strong as he was forever. Someday, he would slip up, and Ivan would be there, ready and waiting to take his precious Toris back from that thief), Ivan would have to make sure to include him on some family fun, as well. After he taught him a lesson on not leaving, of course. He couldn't allow those terrible ideas to remain in Toris's head any longer. And he was sure that perhaps even at this very moment, Alfred was ( ... )
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Please continue <333
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I love how both brothers react to each other's torment, and how Raivis feels guilty every time that he has slightly negative feelings towards either one of his brothers.
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Fuck. I definitely feel Eduard's shock right now.
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I'll still be waiting like mad, but you really don't need to feel under pressure too much XD
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Please continue <33
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