Ivan - Part 2
anonymous
June 29 2009, 01:18:48 UTC
Dear Russia
No, too formal.
Beloved Brother
No...it sounded too creepy-stalker. That was the way she knew she usually came across to him, and she wanted this to be different, wanted him to think about this letter seriously.
Ivan
Yes. Short, and straight to the point.
Ivan, I...I'm not even sure how to begin this letter, or where I'm going with it. I haven't planned it out; and I'm not going to erase anything I write, because if I do, I'll erase and erase and never be happy with anything I write. So I'm just going to leave it all as I write it the first time, and send it, with no editations or corrections. It will be straight from my heart.
Ivan...brother...I love you.
I know what you're thinking right now. You're probably smiling in amusement, that cheerful little smile of yours, the one that scares everyone else but which is so endearing to me, the one I think about whenever I think of you, because it's such a part of you, as much as that scarf our sister made for you, and when she made it, you were so happy, and you smiled
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is glad you liked it so much. :) I seriously thought I wasn't going to get like...any comments on this. I was so sure people were going to hate it. But I guess people seem to like it, so that's good. :D
No, too formal.
Beloved Brother
No...it sounded too creepy-stalker. That was the way she knew she usually came across to him, and she wanted this to be different, wanted him to think about this letter seriously.
Ivan
Yes. Short, and straight to the point.
Ivan, I...I'm not even sure how to begin this letter, or where I'm going with it. I haven't planned it out; and I'm not going to erase anything I write, because if I do, I'll erase and erase and never be happy with anything I write. So I'm just going to leave it all as I write it the first time, and send it, with no editations or corrections. It will be straight from my heart.
Ivan...brother...I love you.
I know what you're thinking right now. You're probably smiling in amusement, that cheerful little smile of yours, the one that scares everyone else but which is so endearing to me, the one I think about whenever I think of you, because it's such a part of you, as much as that scarf our sister made for you, and when she made it, you were so happy, and you smiled ( ... )
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Oh god you're gonna make me cry. I hate crying. It's messy. But this time I'll make an exception, I guess. Oh man.
Author, you are wonderful. Thank you.
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