Taste of Revenge [7/?]
anonymous
June 11 2009, 05:03:54 UTC
“Not that he doesn’t deserve it”, Francis mumbled “Right, America?”
Ivan uncovered his mouth, but Alfred didn’t even try to answer. He couldn’t waste time, not when every second of air was precious. Francis smiled at him, disdain clear in his blue eyes, shaking his head.
Arthur’s hand was still between his legs, his fingers running over Alfred’s pants. He had a distant memory of choosing not to change into his denims because- why was that anyway? He could feel the shame and fear in the pit of his stomach, because Arthur was pinching and pulling the fabric and he could feel his touch and wanted to cross his legs but it was impossible, and this-
-this was it, wasn't it? This was the punishment they had planned for him. He heard the sound of the scissors and blushed, because they wouldn’t even bother to undress him. They’d just uncover the hole they planned to use.
“Hand me the tape”, Arthur said, and Alfred tried to glare at him. Why, he wanted to ask, why are you doing this to me? But then Ivan pushed him forward, almost making
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Re: Taste of Revenge [11/?]
anonymous
July 3 2009, 21:47:19 UTC
Thank you so much for saying this! Yes, I remember the hipocrites part and I almost mentioned in the note, but then I thought I´d be telling people how to read it or something, and well. I´m just relieved that came across. Thanks again! ^^
Artist!Anon here ....
anonymous
July 3 2009, 04:02:06 UTC
totally agrees with above anon! :D I'm glad to see you continuing this! I'm kinda glad you put 9/11 in this since it kinda adds to the recession and our ever growing National Debt. Also, the way you wrote Feli in this is totally perfect!! I'm totally gonna redraw the whole thing after I'm done, and I'll most likely follow your fic more cause it's that good 8D
Re: Artist!Anon here ....
anonymous
July 3 2009, 05:03:15 UTC
haha yeah, I'll most likely redraw it. I regret not putting enough effort in the first couple of pages. Heck, if I get enough pages I might consider making it a book. Especially if that sequel ever like happens :D
AuthorAnon here.
anonymous
July 3 2009, 21:13:11 UTC
OMG REALLY?
I feel so honored! Really, you made my day, thank you so much!
(I was afraid 9/11 would end up being too offensive, but, like you said, it added a lot to what America´s facing today so I had to at least mention it. I'm glad it worked.^^)
OP is always, always late
anonymous
July 7 2009, 16:26:18 UTC
First, I need to apologise for not being around very much. Then, I need to commend you on what an excellent fill you have going on here. I love it. I love that it's complementing artist!anon's drool-worthy art, and I love the expansion of the story that can probably only be done in writing.
I love the threat about the scissors, perhaps a little too much to be normal, but, haha, haven't I already proven myself a pervert for requesting this in the first place?
Taste of Revenge [12/?]
anonymous
July 17 2009, 02:25:35 UTC
So he did it again, licking him carefully, letting Feliciano’s moans guide him. Feliciano kept his hand on Alfred’s hair, running his fingers through each lock and the rogue curl that he could never tame, not pulling, not hurting, actually caressing his hair. The- the best lovers are Italians, someone had told him that in other life, before this, this madness, and Alfred tried to focus on that, tried to forget Francis’ hard thrusts and Feliciano’s cock inside his mouth, to focus only on the soft caress of those fingers on his head.
A harsh voice burst his bubble, brought him back to earth:
“Hey, make room for me,” Romano was saying. Feliciano opened his eyes, surprised, and Alfred- Alfred couldn’t do a thing, but he almost cringed when Romano looked down on him, because he had never seem so much contempt, not even here, it was like- like Romano found him utterly worthless. “If he can shove all those burgers in his mouth, I’m sure he can take both of us. Right, America
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Taste of Revenge [13/?]
anonymous
July 17 2009, 02:28:43 UTC
Alfred could still hear Romano’s words inside his head, and, and somehow, somehow he expected to be humiliated and, and everything, but that was different, that was embarrassment more than shame, and he couldn’t help but resent it. Romano didn’t have to say those awful things in front of everyone, he didn’t!
It was the worst, this, the worst thing they had done to him so far, and he didn’t want to think about it. Francis was still pushing inside him, in, out, in and out, and both Italies were kissing above his head and now he knew he was hard he couldn’t forget this either, couldn’t ignore the fact he was hard and he was getting closer and closer- oh God, he thought, oh God, fuck, fuck why is this happening to me, and he didn’t know what were those jolts of pleasure in the middle of the pain and shame, it hadn’t faded, he was still hurting, he was, so why was he hard, he didn’t want this, oh God-“Shit,” Francis grunted “I’m coming”, and Romano was too, and it took Alfred a few precious seconds to realize two people were about to cum
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Ivan uncovered his mouth, but Alfred didn’t even try to answer. He couldn’t waste time, not when every second of air was precious. Francis smiled at him, disdain clear in his blue eyes, shaking his head.
Arthur’s hand was still between his legs, his fingers running over Alfred’s pants. He had a distant memory of choosing not to change into his denims because- why was that anyway? He could feel the shame and fear in the pit of his stomach, because Arthur was pinching and pulling the fabric and he could feel his touch and wanted to cross his legs but it was impossible, and this-
-this was it, wasn't it? This was the punishment they had planned for him. He heard the sound of the scissors and blushed, because they wouldn’t even bother to undress him. They’d just uncover the hole they planned to use.
“Hand me the tape”, Arthur said, and Alfred tried to glare at him. Why, he wanted to ask, why are you doing this to me? But then Ivan pushed him forward, almost making ( ... )
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I'm glad to see you continuing this! I'm kinda glad you put 9/11 in this since it kinda adds to the recession and our ever growing National Debt. Also, the way you wrote Feli in this is totally perfect!! I'm totally gonna redraw the whole thing after I'm done, and I'll most likely follow your fic more cause it's that good 8D
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Y-you're going to re-draw it to match the fic!? Oh, anon, you're spoiling us.
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I feel so honored! Really, you made my day, thank you so much!
(I was afraid 9/11 would end up being too offensive, but, like you said, it added a lot to what America´s facing today so I had to at least mention it. I'm glad it worked.^^)
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I love the threat about the scissors, perhaps a little too much to be normal, but, haha, haven't I already proven myself a pervert for requesting this in the first place?
I feel utterly spoilt. *blows kisses*
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reCAPTCHA: and songs. O_O Does captcha want me to make the sequel into a musical?
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A harsh voice burst his bubble, brought him back to earth:
“Hey, make room for me,” Romano was saying. Feliciano opened his eyes, surprised, and Alfred- Alfred couldn’t do a thing, but he almost cringed when Romano looked down on him, because he had never seem so much contempt, not even here, it was like- like Romano found him utterly worthless. “If he can shove all those burgers in his mouth, I’m sure he can take both of us. Right, America ( ... )
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It was the worst, this, the worst thing they had done to him so far, and he didn’t want to think about it. Francis was still pushing inside him, in, out, in and out, and both Italies were kissing above his head and now he knew he was hard he couldn’t forget this either, couldn’t ignore the fact he was hard and he was getting closer and closer- oh God, he thought, oh God, fuck, fuck why is this happening to me, and he didn’t know what were those jolts of pleasure in the middle of the pain and shame, it hadn’t faded, he was still hurting, he was, so why was he hard, he didn’t want this, oh God-“Shit,” Francis grunted “I’m coming”, and Romano was too, and it took Alfred a few precious seconds to realize two people were about to cum ( ... )
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Alfred so deserves vengance. Which is why I don't feel any guilt reading the vengance fics.
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Like I am helplessly watching someone...
I should go read more revenge fics, it eases my guilt.
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