Request #1, which already has a perfectly good fill, asked for inexperienced America. Alfred is pretty experienced here.
Request #2, which doesn't have a fill so I sincerely hope someone else will take it, asked for America becoming an isolationist nation in response to being raped as punishment for the economic crisis. If you tilt your head and squint, you might see something like that here. (Bonus of Matthew going with him is included, at least
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snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (1/4)
anonymous
July 16 2009, 22:03:57 UTC
snapshots from a rentboy's photo album ~ only whores & lovers
Looking pretty isn't working for them tonight so Matthew shifts his weight, leans his shoulder against the wall, and places his hand on Alfred's belly. When Alfred obligingly stretches and sucks in his breath, Matthew slides his hand down inside Alfred's jeans. Alfred's arm drapes onto Matthew's shoulder, bending so his fingers can tangle in the hair above Matthew's nape. Alfred pushes into Matthew's hand as Matthew starts, the lazy little teases of strokes along Alfred's cock echoed by Alfred's fingertips in Matthew's hair. Arching and tilting to look out into the street, Matthew wets his open lips. Now they're pretty and they're invitingStill, nobody stops. Nobody slows
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snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (2/4)
anonymous
July 16 2009, 22:05:43 UTC
snapshots from a rentboy's photo album ~ pretty when you lieIt's been a year and a half since Alfred left, and three weeks since Arthur found him. Three weeks since Arthur has been fucking him
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snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 16 2009, 22:09:39 UTC
snapshots from a rentboy's photo album ~ caught in loveThis time, Arthur fucks Alfred himself; this time, he has Matthew watch. He has Alfred watch, too, looking up at Arthur as Arthur fucks him
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Re: snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 17 2009, 04:14:31 UTC
I very much enjoyed this, as I enjoy all your fills - I think this is a bit darker than your take on the other fills you've done, but it's a very nicely surprising change. I'll admit my favorite part is the story at the end, simply because I'm such a fan of fairy tales and the style they're written in. (You can probably tell that by some of my fills, haha.)
I have nothing more to add than to say that I always look forward to your works, and that you and metallic_sweet are my two inspirations for this fandom. Thank you for all your hard work.
Re: snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 17 2009, 06:15:25 UTC
Author!anon thanks you very much. I think you're right that this is a little more bleak than my usual, and I'm honestly not sure how I feel about this one --so it's a great relief to know you enjoyed it. The last one is my favorite, too, truth be told, and I'm thinking that might be the only part I post in my own journal.
As an aside, I thought I'd try to be completely anonymous because of my mixed feelings and made an effort to change some of the formatting things that seem to have given me away in the past, but I guess I didn't change enough. Uh, that is, if I am who you think I am!
Re: snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 17 2009, 15:01:24 UTC
You also wrote "The Only Way Out is Through," IIRC. Don't feel bad - as a writer myself, I've gotten good at recognizing styles, especially if I see consistencies in pieces I read. Here, your words gave you away more than your formatting.
reCaptcha: dahl you. ...how very right you are, Captcha.
Re: snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 19 2009, 11:08:37 UTC
Yet another amazing fill, though I especially like how this one left me with some absolutely delicious imagery.
I wouldn't have known it was you without having read the other comments, but now that I do, I can see certain similarities in your writing style. I like how even though in "the only way out is through" the basis is much darker with a hopeful ending, this is a stark contrast, being a bit lighter in thought until the end came at me and I pieced it all together.
Re: snapshots from a rentboy's photo album (4/4)
anonymous
July 19 2009, 17:00:27 UTC
until the end came at me and I pieced it all together.
This makes me so happy! I probably spent as much time figuring out the order for the snapshots as I did writing them, especially the "ruins" one. This sense of piecing it together is perfect for what I wanted.
Thanks very much for reading, and especially for your thoughtful comments!
REQUEST #1
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=7175639#t7175639
(rentboy!America)
REQUEST #2
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=13508874#t13508874
(isolationist!America)
Request #1, which already has a perfectly good fill, asked for inexperienced America. Alfred is pretty experienced here.
Request #2, which doesn't have a fill so I sincerely hope someone else will take it, asked for America becoming an isolationist nation in response to being raped as punishment for the economic crisis. If you tilt your head and squint, you might see something like that here. (Bonus of Matthew going with him is included, at least ( ... )
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Looking pretty isn't working for them tonight so Matthew shifts his weight, leans his shoulder against the wall, and places his hand on Alfred's belly. When Alfred obligingly stretches and sucks in his breath, Matthew slides his hand down inside Alfred's jeans. Alfred's arm drapes onto Matthew's shoulder, bending so his fingers can tangle in the hair above Matthew's nape. Alfred pushes into Matthew's hand as Matthew starts, the lazy little teases of strokes along Alfred's cock echoed by Alfred's fingertips in Matthew's hair. Arching and tilting to look out into the street, Matthew wets his open lips. Now they're pretty and they're invitingStill, nobody stops. Nobody slows ( ... )
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I have nothing more to add than to say that I always look forward to your works, and that you and metallic_sweet are my two inspirations for this fandom. Thank you for all your hard work.
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As an aside, I thought I'd try to be completely anonymous because of my mixed feelings and made an effort to change some of the formatting things that seem to have given me away in the past, but I guess I didn't change enough. Uh, that is, if I am who you think I am!
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reCaptcha: dahl you. ...how very right you are, Captcha.
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FUCKING OW.
I LOVED THIS.
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I wouldn't have known it was you without having read the other comments, but now that I do, I can see certain similarities in your writing style.
I like how even though in "the only way out is through" the basis is much darker with a hopeful ending, this is a stark contrast, being a bit lighter in thought until the end came at me and I pieced it all together.
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This makes me so happy! I probably spent as much time figuring out the order for the snapshots as I did writing them, especially the "ruins" one. This sense of piecing it together is perfect for what I wanted.
Thanks very much for reading, and especially for your thoughtful comments!
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