Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 1)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 11:00:26 UTC
Fills this request from part 2: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=3499722#t3499722How much was a nation supposed to take, before he snapped? The question had been on Gilbert's mind from time to time, increasingly so after his brother lost That Damned War and Ivan began to poke his long nose into all of Gilbert's business
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Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 2)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 12:47:52 UTC
Three nights later, the moon was just a sliver hidden behind light clouds. It was a warm June evening, but the odds against success made cold sweat run down Gilbert's back. No... not Gilbert. Tonight, he was all Prussia again
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Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 3)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 13:03:25 UTC
From the sounds below, there was another guard change and Prussia forced himself to relax. If there were twice as many guards around, he'd be quite stupid to move right now. The little voice in Prussia's head which knew quite a bit about tactics and sounded unusually much like Old Fritz tonight, reminded him that when the guards were fresh and he had been lying here for three hours, his chances wouldn't exactly improve. It could even be argued, that right now, when they were talking to each other, was when the guards were the most relaxed and inattentive. Of course, if Prussia was afraid, he could almost come back tomorrow night? Or next week - only be then the game would be over, so he might as well stay at home and have some more vodka.
"Ahhh...." Prussia squeezed his eyes shut and, very softly because he wasn't quite suicidal thank you, began to beat his fist against the roof. Would he? Would he not? It was- it wasn't running away, it wasn't abandoning his country! And it was absolutely not because he couldn't help trembling (
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Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 4)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 14:33:39 UTC
The sweet, heady smell of newly baked chocolate cake makes Gilbert's mouth water almost before he is properly awake. Underlying that, there is the lovely fresh smell of- oh god, was that fresh doughnuts
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Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 5)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 16:16:07 UTC
It would have been nice to say that the stern mien left West's face, or that his icy blue eyes softened. Unfortunately, he only frowned and pinched the bridge of his nose in a familiar movement of exasperation. "That is all you are worried about?"
"Hey, I came here for the game, didn't I?"
"Oh." Slowly, West put away the cake tray and absentmindedly picked up a napkin to wipe Gilbert's mouth. Okay, weird. Had his little brother gone and picked a few kids of his own, or what
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Germany - Germany 1-0 (part 6)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 16:17:00 UTC
Then chocolate cake followed by jelly donuts - man, could West bake. He was just reaching for the pineapple crumb cake that he figured had been made especially for him, when West decided that he'd had enough of watching a smear of chocolate cream on Gilbert's nose. Somehow, between West trying to clean him off and Gilbert completely focused on the pineapple cake (pineapples! Ahhh!) their heads clonked together rather painfully
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Re: Germany - Germany 1-0 (footnotes)
anonymous
July 3 2009, 17:28:57 UTC
(not op) Oh my goodness. This is like new favorite fic. You made me fall in love with Prussia all over again, the voice was absolutely perfect for Gilbert, and the interaction between East and West (heartbreaking and awww)... I love the details about the bedroom and West's taste in literature and just the cakes and the worry and.... *loves* ^^ Thank you!
Re: Germany - Germany 1-0 (footnotes)
anonymous
July 4 2009, 06:53:44 UTC
(Still not OP) Like the other anon said, it's fills like these that make me remember why I loved Prussia in the first place. Wonderful interaction and I loved how you managed to keep the mix of funny and melancholy so well balanced. Really, beautifully handled. There's not nearly enough (well-written)GDR!Gilbert around.
New Economic Measures for Increased Productivity and Its Application On the Automobile Industry - I think I saw this one on the anon meme a couple of days ago. Or it might just be my memory playing around. Somehow that bit looked very familiar when I read it
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=3499722#t3499722How much was a nation supposed to take, before he snapped? The question had been on Gilbert's mind from time to time, increasingly so after his brother lost That Damned War and Ivan began to poke his long nose into all of Gilbert's business ( ... )
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The little voice in Prussia's head which knew quite a bit about tactics and sounded unusually much like Old Fritz tonight, reminded him that when the guards were fresh and he had been lying here for three hours, his chances wouldn't exactly improve. It could even be argued, that right now, when they were talking to each other, was when the guards were the most relaxed and inattentive. Of course, if Prussia was afraid, he could almost come back tomorrow night? Or next week - only be then the game would be over, so he might as well stay at home and have some more vodka.
"Ahhh...." Prussia squeezed his eyes shut and, very softly because he wasn't quite suicidal thank you, began to beat his fist against the roof. Would he? Would he not? It was- it wasn't running away, it wasn't abandoning his country! And it was absolutely not because he couldn't help trembling ( ( ... )
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"That is all you are worried about?"
"Hey, I came here for the game, didn't I?"
"Oh." Slowly, West put away the cake tray and absentmindedly picked up a napkin to wipe Gilbert's mouth. Okay, weird. Had his little brother gone and picked a few kids of his own, or what ( ... )
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New Economic Measures for Increased Productivity and Its Application On the Automobile Industry - I think I saw this one on the anon meme a couple of days ago. Or it might just be my memory playing around. Somehow that bit looked very familiar when I read it
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thanks, glad you liked my characterization!
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