this is the kiss (1/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 07:02:29 UTC
NOTE: This is not the offer!anon from above. This is, however, fail!anon with a spectacular fail: somehow, I wrote down this request as "first kiss" not "first time." So I'm not sure this should even count as a fill, and I really hope another anon will come up something closer to what OP was after. Posting anyhow in the hopes this will please at least a little.
This is the Kiss - part oneAlfred is--Matthew can't believe this--Alfred is sitting here, right next to him, he's just: Alfred F. Jones is sitting next to him, has said hello to him, and Matthew can't believe it. Alfred is smiling and sitting with him and talking to him; it's been this way his whole life, of course, but it's only in the past few weeks that disbelief has come to Matthew. These past few weeks have been different for Matthew-but not, apparently, for Alfred. And that is what Matthew cannot believe. Because the past few weeks are separated from the hundreds of years that came before them by a kiss
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this is the kiss (2/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 07:03:43 UTC
This is the Kiss - part twoThat had been Tokyo. This is New York, the first time Matthew and Alfred have been together, though not alone, since the G7 summit. It's the first time Matthew has seen Alfred since the kiss, which Alfred is acting like he doesn't remember. And Matthew just doesn't see how that can be, how someone can forget a kiss
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this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 07:18:49 UTC
This is the Kiss - part fourBut a moment later Alfred's back, tugging him up, "Come on, come on!", smiling all pleased with himself. So it's probably not a cab. Matthew follows him to the private room that it turns out Alfred's arranged for them, and a couple of ladies come in and Matthew sits properly with them and appreciates their nipples and all that, appreciates them up close and properly when one of them wants to give him a lap dance. Or maybe she doesn't really want to, but she doesn't seem to mind and Alfred is very encouraging about the matter. He seems to like it, grins and winks at Matthew when their eyes meet, and Matthew feels a giggle so he has to stop looking at Alfred because really, in this position, what is he going to put in his mouth? So Matthew stops looking and just sits there properly enjoying his lap dance, only giving Alfred a glance or two to see if Alfred's taking notice of just how properly Matthew is doing this, right down to the little bit of hard-on he's starting to sport
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Re: this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 11:18:28 UTC
Humble anon thinks you did a better job than what OP requested. You didn't make either of them lame or stereotypical, or "kawaiiiiiii so cuuuuuuuute mooooooeeeee". You made them them, and that takes much more skill and finesse.
So I salute and commend you, anon. This was nice to read, and if you'd stuck closer to the prompt, I know I would have quickly mashed the back button.
Re: this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 16:57:31 UTC
Author!anon thanks you most sincerely, Anon! After I finished writing, I must have spent an hour looking for the "first kiss" request. Right as I had given up on finding it, it suddenly hit me that I noted the wrong thing for the request. I wasn't sure if I should even post it, but your lovely words have made me feel much better about it. Thank you again!
Re: this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 14 2009, 16:53:46 UTC
Thank you, Anon! Author!anon thinks Matthew was probably embarrassed himself (at least once he sobered up enough to recall it clearly), but suspects Alfred found it adorable...
Re: this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 16 2009, 00:50:53 UTC
Matthew just reminded me why I don't drink alcohol anymore. XD
Also, this is spectacular! I like the dynamic you gave them and how the whole thing was done so well from Matthew's perspective. It was really sweet and altogether a fantastic story. Thank you very much for writing it!
Re: this is the kiss (4/4)
anonymous
May 16 2009, 01:16:00 UTC
Author!anon is very happy you enjoyed, and thank you for reading it! Yes, Matthew...well, he made a bit of a spectacle of himself, didn't he? Alfred still thought he was hot, though--which probably says as much about Alfred as it does about Matthew!
canada being clumsy and moe,and america tease him.
(and please involve canada's erogenous zone hair curl too!!)
ANON REALLY WANT THIS SO BADLY!
PS:sorry for the bad english.
(and to the mods:feel free to delete this post if it doesn't fit the rules.)
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This is the Kiss - part oneAlfred is--Matthew can't believe this--Alfred is sitting here, right next to him, he's just: Alfred F. Jones is sitting next to him, has said hello to him, and Matthew can't believe it. Alfred is smiling and sitting with him and talking to him; it's been this way his whole life, of course, but it's only in the past few weeks that disbelief has come to Matthew. These past few weeks have been different for Matthew-but not, apparently, for Alfred. And that is what Matthew cannot believe. Because the past few weeks are separated from the hundreds of years that came before them by a kiss ( ... )
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So I salute and commend you, anon. This was nice to read, and if you'd stuck closer to the prompt, I know I would have quickly mashed the back button.
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i was actually thinking of filling this myself, too! xD
i really enjoyed it ♥
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Also, this is spectacular! I like the dynamic you gave them and how the whole thing was done so well from Matthew's perspective. It was really sweet and altogether a fantastic story. Thank you very much for writing it!
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