Surrender [1/3]
anonymous
April 15 2009, 16:16:48 UTC
S'up anons. Sorry for the suck; I'm not a writer, but this begged to be written somehow.
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Lovino knew something was wrong the moment he woke up alone. His brow furrowed; where had that stupid bastard gone now? Antonio usually never woke up before he did, and even then he would wake Lovino up soon afterwards some way or another. But there next to him was undeniable proof: an empty space, the covers already drawn up as if no one had used that side of the bed at all. He risked a glance outside the window--full daylight, warm and sunny. Antonio would normally be hard-pressed to wake up on this kind of day... Did the idiot go and get himself kidnapped?
He pushed aside the bedsheets, listening intently for any sign of Antonio.
After another long moment of near silence, his heart sank strangely in his chest when he realized he was completely alone. And he was hungry"Damnit," Lovino swore, standing up and mentally blaming everything--his hunger, his confusion, his loneliness--on the goddamn Spaniard and the one goddamn time he broke
( ... )
Surrender [2/3]
anonymous
April 15 2009, 16:18:06 UTC
He closed his eyes tight and howled with the pain as it blossomed from the harsh contact, nearly sobbing. He was confused now, and frightened, and as the panic at last set in, he pleaded with incoherent noises that he was sorry, and to please let him go, please...
There was a hand on his cheek, caressing the skin under gloved fingertips that quickly became wet with tears. "Romano," a voice said distantly, softly, "I want to break you."
Why is this happening!? He thought the words, but nothing passed from his lips but a weak sob that was at once swallowed by a hungry, ruthless, conquering mouth. There was teeth involved in that kiss, all of them Antonio's, and when the Spaniard pulled back, Lovino opened his eyes to see his caretaker's lips tinged red with his blood. Lovino choked on a whimper. This was a nightmare. It had to be... He would wake up soon, and Antonio would be there, fast asleep with his stupid arm around him
( ... )
Surrender [3/3]
anonymous
April 15 2009, 16:19:10 UTC
With Lovino's cooperation, the ruthlessness lessened, but did not vanish entirely. His body was still ravished with biting, claiming kisses, angry red marks left down his neck and chest as Antonio's hands spread his legs wide. To this, Lovino bit his lip shamefully, but did not protest in fear of more pain. Too strange... If he closed his eyes, he would not know the man possessing his body so viciously and so silently was the same who cradled and pampered him all other times during sex, the same that constantly made noise and fierce, Spanish cries of pleasure.
Two fingers shoved roughly inside him made him cry out and focus again on the present, and Lovino realized absently that Antonio had removed his clothes. The only thing he wore now was the silver crucifix around his neck, and the Italian thought crazily that he saw blood on that, too.
He hissed and squirmed during the quick and rough preparation, and Lovino swallowed in dismay. Antonio's fingers withdrew too quickly. He was barely prepared at all, but the Spaniard was still
( ... )
Re: Surrender [3/3]
anonymous
April 15 2009, 22:09:55 UTC
I second what the other anon said and also would like to add that Inquisition-esque!Spain doesn't like it when you lie, writer anon~ Or, if you weren't a writer before YOU DAMN WELL ARE NOW 8DDD So... definitely take the initiative write more for us! That would be... so amazing.
Re: Surrender [3/3]
anonymous
April 16 2009, 16:49:36 UTC
I'm with the two commenters up there - why such lies? I liked the fact that you made contrasts between the 2 Antonios. This was such a great fill and I'm not alone in saying that we'd like to see more from you. ♥
I'm glad when people realize that there's a lot more to Antonio than the lazy good-natured guy. Spain was a CONQUEROR, almost first and foremost and you captured his violent, brutal brilliantly. The imagery of all the blood and how quickly Lovino broke down from the sudden assault... A wonderful job!
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Lovino knew something was wrong the moment he woke up alone. His brow furrowed; where had that stupid bastard gone now? Antonio usually never woke up before he did, and even then he would wake Lovino up soon afterwards some way or another. But there next to him was undeniable proof: an empty space, the covers already drawn up as if no one had used that side of the bed at all. He risked a glance outside the window--full daylight, warm and sunny. Antonio would normally be hard-pressed to wake up on this kind of day... Did the idiot go and get himself kidnapped?
He pushed aside the bedsheets, listening intently for any sign of Antonio.
After another long moment of near silence, his heart sank strangely in his chest when he realized he was completely alone. And he was hungry"Damnit," Lovino swore, standing up and mentally blaming everything--his hunger, his confusion, his loneliness--on the goddamn Spaniard and the one goddamn time he broke ( ... )
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There was a hand on his cheek, caressing the skin under gloved fingertips that quickly became wet with tears. "Romano," a voice said distantly, softly, "I want to break you."
Why is this happening!? He thought the words, but nothing passed from his lips but a weak sob that was at once swallowed by a hungry, ruthless, conquering mouth. There was teeth involved in that kiss, all of them Antonio's, and when the Spaniard pulled back, Lovino opened his eyes to see his caretaker's lips tinged red with his blood. Lovino choked on a whimper. This was a nightmare. It had to be... He would wake up soon, and Antonio would be there, fast asleep with his stupid arm around him ( ... )
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Two fingers shoved roughly inside him made him cry out and focus again on the present, and Lovino realized absently that Antonio had removed his clothes. The only thing he wore now was the silver crucifix around his neck, and the Italian thought crazily that he saw blood on that, too.
He hissed and squirmed during the quick and rough preparation, and Lovino swallowed in dismay. Antonio's fingers withdrew too quickly. He was barely prepared at all, but the Spaniard was still ( ... )
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You ended the story at such an evil place though - what's going to happen to Lovi? and is it too much for anon to ask for a sequel? :DDD
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Or, if you weren't a writer before YOU DAMN WELL ARE NOW 8DDD So... definitely take the initiative write more for us! That would be... so amazing.
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I'm glad when people realize that there's a lot more to Antonio than the lazy good-natured guy. Spain was a CONQUEROR, almost first and foremost and you captured his violent, brutal brilliantly. The imagery of all the blood and how quickly Lovino broke down from the sudden assault... A wonderful job!
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thank you for turning me on.
the inquisition hasn't been this cool since monty python.
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That was gorgeous. Well done :'D
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