Re: Alfred angst?
anonymous
March 30 2009, 13:09:26 UTC
Not the above anon who to do a fill, but this is my first contribution to the kink meme and while I'm not happy with it I thought I might as well post it. It's inspired by a documentary on the Golden Gate Bridge I watched a while ago. I'm really sorry for it being so awful and I'm sure the other anon will do a much better job ><;;;It was a beautiful day for the locals and tourists alike. The traffic over the Golden Gate Bridge was busy as usual, and the pavements filled with passers-by. A German businessman jogged through the crowds on his cell phone and trying to find his partner- taking a break for sightseeing had been one of the worst ideas his boss had made, and now he was stuck looking for the dim assistant who had insisted on joining him for a tour. As he tried to get the sobbing Italian to calm down and tell him which side of the bridge he was on, he accidentally ran into the side of a blonde teenager. Muttering an apology and continuing on, he didn't look back to even properly see the boy's face
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The Bridge pt. 2 (pt. 1 in the comment above)
anonymous
March 30 2009, 13:11:41 UTC
When the boat arrived with men in while full-body suits the crowd gathered at the railings began to disperse. On the bridge Berwald handed over the few things the jumper had left behind- the folded leather jacket, along with a wallet and a dog tag. He hurried over to hug his shocked wife and leave as fast as possible
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Re: The Bridge pt. 2 (pt. 1 in the comment above)
anonymous
April 14 2009, 20:36:41 UTC
Y-You, you almost had me crying there. Oh my God, I really love how everything just... HAPPENS. You didn't go in depth on the important things, like why Alfred commited suicide, and I really love how you made it sort of something to speculate.
I found the end so bitter too, but that's what made it so great. D: How Arthur didn't want to believe it and stuff.
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On the other hand...*sniff* Poor Alfred. :( Good job, writer!anon
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I found the end so bitter too, but that's what made it so great. D: How Arthur didn't want to believe it and stuff.
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