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anonymous
January 4 2011, 23:51:54 UTC
“Th’nks f’r c’m'ng t' th' p'rty." Sweden waved Denmark out, frowning slightly. Of course, Denmark had gone and messed up his house completely. Leave it to that idiot. Norway followed Denmark, glaring at Sweden out of the corner of his eye as he passed. Sweden glared back a bit, then closed the door when they finally got out. Finally, everyone had left. He turned back to look at his house, then cursed loudly. Of course, he had a fucking mess to clean up. And Finland was nowhere to be found. Most likely he'd gotten drunk again and fallen asleep. In that case, he wouldn't bother him until it was time to clean the bedroom as well, since France had gotten in there for some questionable and most likely romantic events. He sighed again, then started to pick up the empty bottles of assorted alcohols, ranging from beer to vodka to sake. And there were a lot of those. In fact, he counted about two hundred by the time he'd finally gathered them all up, and that was just the empty ones. There were half-empty and unopened bottles lying around as
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Re: InsertAwesomeTitle [1/???]
anonymous
January 5 2011, 02:27:05 UTC
*bangs his head on the wall* I understand that Sweden mumbles his words, but it doesn't mean at all that you must cut out every single vowel from his speech... Use apostrophes like salt - season to taste.
Re: InsertAwesomeTitle [1/???]
anonymous
January 5 2011, 09:17:31 UTC
Huh. This was totally not what I expected (I've somhow gotten too used to the whole "wrapped up as a gift" cliché).
Sounds good so far, though. I really like it and am curious to see what will happen next. (also poor Finland, he's probably not nearly as drunk as Sweden thought or Finland would like to be)
Also, about the discussion above: When they say "use it like salt", here's an idea (what I was doing, anyway). At one point, you'll get a feeling for how much you can substitute with an '. At first, either a) pick one vowel to substitute (like substituting all "i"s) or b) make it a rule to only substitute about every fifth or seventh word.
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Don't stop now!
MOAAR /hammers F5 key/
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I understand that Sweden mumbles his words, but it doesn't mean at all that you must cut out every single vowel from his speech... Use apostrophes like salt - season to taste.
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Sounds good so far, though. I really like it and am curious to see what will happen next. (also poor Finland, he's probably not nearly as drunk as Sweden thought or Finland would like to be)
Also, about the discussion above: When they say "use it like salt", here's an idea (what I was doing, anyway). At one point, you'll get a feeling for how much you can substitute with an '. At first, either a) pick one vowel to substitute (like substituting all "i"s) or b) make it a rule to only substitute about every fifth or seventh word.
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