France/England, whipping, 1/2
anonymous
April 5 2009, 15:43:42 UTC
It’s been awhile since the last time England showed up at his door with a bottle in one hand and a leather cat in the other. It’s not something France gets off on, particularly (he has better ways of making people scream), but this is something England needs, and he needs it from France.
It’s less that England trusts him (though he does, far more than he admits) than that he honestly does not care what France thinks of him, or his needs.
So France steps back and allows England to brush past him through the doorway. England hands him the cat and heads for the kitchen, stripping his shirt off as he goes. Under normal circumstances, France wouldn’t let England in his kitchen under threat of torture, but it’s the easiest room to clean if England bleeds. England’s pants follow his shirt after he kicks his shoes off, and he braces his hands against the light, blue-and-white wallpaper in only his boxers and football socks
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France/England, whipping, 2/2
anonymous
April 5 2009, 15:48:27 UTC
He works himself into a smooth rhythm, bringing the flaring strips of the whip slapping down on England’s back over and over, relishing the steady ache in his arm as he makes the strokes harder, then harder still. When the first drops of blood start oozing from the abused flesh and stain the dark leather, England stops his silent panting and whimpers, a helpless, tiny, drowning-kitten sound, and France tightens his grip on the cat and forces himself to keep a steady pace. His pants are uncomfortably tight, so much so that he can feel the seam of his fly against the sensitized skin of his prick. He shifts his hips and earns a little friction for his trouble. He rachets up the beating, flaying England as if the whip could tear through him and lay sweet whip marks on the wall
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This F5'ing little anon totally appreciated the WAFFy tie-off, but holy hell. Recently discovered strapping and moving into whipping territory in terms of kinks, but, yesss. Been eyeing this prompt for ages, and this is one hell of a fill, writernon. |D And it's delightfully IC, too. Thanks for a great start to the morning, mmmmmhm.
Re: France/England, whipping, 2/2
anonymous
April 6 2009, 00:29:41 UTC
That was very good. I liked the nonsense approach England takes at the beginning and the suggestion they do this all the time is kind of delicious. The ending is cute in a wonderfully dark kind of way.
Re: France/England, whipping, 2/2
anonymous
April 9 2009, 01:35:05 UTC
I...I really enjoyed this. Lovely use of alliteration and the off-side imagery really adds depth to the story (eg- 'marble counter top (perfect for pastry)')
And I actually think the ending was a good twist of believability. They can do this crazy shit because they like and trust each other. It's not hatesex. So- yeah. Really good work. :)
So I'd like France/England, someone getting whipped and both of them enjoying it, please.
Merci.
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It’s less that England trusts him (though he does, far more than he admits) than that he honestly does not care what France thinks of him, or his needs.
So France steps back and allows England to brush past him through the doorway. England hands him the cat and heads for the kitchen, stripping his shirt off as he goes. Under normal circumstances, France wouldn’t let England in his kitchen under threat of torture, but it’s the easiest room to clean if England bleeds. England’s pants follow his shirt after he kicks his shoes off, and he braces his hands against the light, blue-and-white wallpaper in only his boxers and football socks ( ... )
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Oh England... Oh France...
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Anon totally approves of this Arthur beating
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And I actually think the ending was a good twist of believability. They can do this crazy shit because they like and trust each other. It's not hatesex. So- yeah. Really good work. :)
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