it's basically about how Canada will do anything for America and will even become evil for his sake. The second page of the comments in the YouTube video will have lyrics explaining why Japan is in the video as well. :D
Opening Heaven's Gate 1/?
anonymous
March 13 2009, 06:42:24 UTC
So, this is more of a response to the youtube vid referenced above; you'd better watch it first for this to make any sense. I'm still hoping that someone will eventually write it up; In the meantime, I hope this will serve. Um - some OOC?
Opening Heaven's Gate “Have you heard anything from North America?” France whispered softly to Arthur
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Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 13 2009, 06:45:18 UTC
A voice split the sudden silence. “Then what is it, comrade?” Ivan smiled pleasantly, toying with the end of his scarf. “So it WAS little Matthew, yes? Taking your place - such a charming boy, your brother. I had wondered. He didn’t fight back, didn’t raise a hand in his own defense - he was smiling, do you know? As if he was so very terribly happy - ah. I see why. Because he knew that he was taking your death, that you could be free and profit from his demise
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anonymous
March 13 2009, 08:42:43 UTC
jsahdahsdkjash. How are you so awesome. How.
Canada....Alfred MOURNING his brother....YOU EVEN QUOTED KIPLING, AND I CAME WHEN YOU DID. I began tracking this meme just to see what came of THIS request and it was so worth it, it was beautiful~
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 13 2009, 09:15:54 UTC
THAT. WAS. EPIC.
I love how you transitioned between Alfred's mourning and his sheer badassery when telling off Russia. France and England's interactions were interesting too, to say the least.
Oh my God, I wish to see more of this United Continent of North America/Alfred Matthews (both names just roll off the tongue, don't they?). Author!anon, you've created something AMAZINGLY AWESOME.
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 13 2009, 19:24:32 UTC
Oh my goodness, that was a *fantastic* sucker-punch to the heart. I love the way you told the story from the point of view of Arthur, and Francis's presence. And that ending was just *killer*.
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 14 2009, 03:20:46 UTC
Anon, I-I just-- No I can't put into words how FUCKING AWESOME THIS IS. I started bawling (lol literally), like... TWO PARAGRAPHS IN WHAT. I love you. So much. Your writing is amazing, emotion-provoking; and I love the switch between sorrowful and solemn to BADASS and AWESOME.
Also? Alfred. Just... JUST SNAPPED!ALFRED FFFFFFF ALSKFJlasKFJALKSJALgAWLRKGJasgAELHKjae45 ALKDFjva
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 14 2009, 05:01:18 UTC
Holy crap this is epic! I seriously hope that we anons get to see more of this cause mourning-crazy!Alfred is too awesome of a character to pass up. Please authornon, can we have more of this fic? It deserves a sequel!
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 14 2009, 08:26:48 UTC
That was... the atmosphere was amazing. Ahhh I feel sorry for all of them! I think you tied your story in very well with the video. The idea of America gaining so much power with an unstable mind is quite horrific, but I loved how you portrayed it. Your writing is lovely, anon, and I really don't know how else to put it. <3
Re: Opening Heaven's Gate 3/3
anonymous
March 15 2009, 03:15:42 UTC
Mourningpsycho!Alfred + Taking over the entire North America = WWIII @____@
Anyways, holy fuck! This was just heartbreaking, yet epic. Poor Matthew. I don't think that he would want his brother to wage war at all, even if it was for him.
I too would love to see a sequel to this wonderful work!
Based on THIS.
it's basically about how Canada will do anything for America and will even become evil for his sake. The second page of the comments in the YouTube video will have lyrics explaining why Japan is in the video as well. :D
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Opening Heaven's Gate “Have you heard anything from North America?” France whispered softly to Arthur ( ... )
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Canada....Alfred MOURNING his brother....YOU EVEN QUOTED KIPLING, AND I CAME WHEN YOU DID. I began tracking this meme just to see what came of THIS request and it was so worth it, it was beautiful~
BRB, rereading for fifth time.
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I love how you transitioned between Alfred's mourning and his sheer badassery when telling off Russia. France and England's interactions were interesting too, to say the least.
Oh my God, I wish to see more of this United Continent of North America/Alfred Matthews (both names just roll off the tongue, don't they?). Author!anon, you've created something AMAZINGLY AWESOME.
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I will sell you my soul to see more of this, anon. I love France and England's reactions, Alfred's raw, unrestrained grief.
But mostly? I love you, anon, for writing it.
/bookmarked
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this is so unreal.
i had tears in my eyes when america said that canada told him he loved him
awesome fill author!anon.
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This is epic. It would make an awesome AU.
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Also? Alfred. Just... JUST SNAPPED!ALFRED FFFFFFF ALSKFJlasKFJALKSJALgAWLRKGJasgAELHKjae45 ALKDFjva
/dissolves into incoherent fangirling
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And poor Canada, I still hurt from that ;___;
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I WISH I COULD FIGURE OUT HOW TO COMMENT PROPERLY
BUT I CAN'T I HOPE YOU CAN FORGIVE ME AHHGHHHHH ;________;
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Anyways, holy fuck! This was just heartbreaking, yet epic. Poor Matthew. I don't think that he would want his brother to wage war at all, even if it was for him.
I too would love to see a sequel to this wonderful work!
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I can't even articulate how amazing. Gah.
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