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HETALIA KINK MEME PART 3

Jan 26, 2011 08:29

axis powers
hetalia kink meme
part 3

VIEW THIS PART ON DREAMWIDTH

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New fills for this part go HERE .
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Eyes (fail Title is fail) anonymous July 7 2010, 14:33:25 UTC

This is the same Annon as above with another Fill, I just love this request XD Franada this time ( ... )

Re: Eyes (fail Title is fail) anonymous July 7 2010, 14:39:40 UTC

Writter!annon is fail.. DX sorry for Double Post DX

anonymous July 11 2010, 04:18:04 UTC

I CAME

Re: Eyes (fail Title is fail) anonymous July 11 2010, 14:01:08 UTC

this is adorable ♥

Oh, he must surely say yes!

Re: Eyes (fail Title is fail) anonymous July 11 2010, 18:33:45 UTC

I actually like the descriptions here, but I think... you probably didn't get a very good mark in English class. Is English your second language, or are you a bit too young to be here?

FailWriter!Annon anonymous July 12 2010, 05:55:06 UTC

Thanks for the compliment...

But I'm 18 .. And English... Where'd I fail? (is in fat dyslexic)

Re: FailWriter!Annon anonymous July 13 2010, 02:27:47 UTC

Again, the visual concepts you've got are very appealing, but there are errors that you could have fixed easily enough with a thorough read-through and a few of the tools that came with your word processor. The title on the Fills List was misspelled, you capitalize words that don't need it, and there are a few mistakes with punctuation and grammar. Your vocabulary is clearly very good, and the content is sweet - unfortunately, it's difficult to read, and that's very important here. If you got a beta reader, it would go along way towards helping you communicate your story.

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