No Mercy, 2/6?
anonymous
May 21 2009, 08:34:05 UTC
Poland had always been slim, even in times of plenty, but he was thinner now than Lithuania had ever seen him, dressed not in the elegant silks and velvets and furs he’d favored for so long, but in a servant’s clothes, the linen earth-stained and hanging too loosely on his body. A rough-twined rope bond his arms together at the wrists and elbows, and around his neck there was a leather collar, pulled tight enough that Lithuania could make out red and cracked skin beneath it, where the darkness of bruises didn’t blot out the red
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They were both silent at that, both recognizing the danger in Russia's innocent tone. Ignoring their silence, the tall nation crossed the room again and took up Poland’s leash, pulling him near. “Such close friends,” he whispered, so low that Lithuania had to strain to hear it. “Is that why Lithuania tries to run? Is that why he lies to me
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No Mercy, Part 5
anonymous
May 21 2009, 08:41:14 UTC
Lithuania shook his head, looked up at Russia pleadingly. “We… We never… Russia, please, stop this!”
“Oh? I… mmm… I thought surely, because you lived together so long… and Poland is very pretty, da? Almost like a girl…” He petted Poland’s cheek, a mocking caress. “It’s a pity he’s not always so quiet. I like him a lot like this, don’t you?”
“No,” Lithuania breathed. He wanted to say more--you’re sick, you can’t do this to him, I like him when he’s free and loud and troublesome and perfect, but he didn’t know if he could get away with it. The chance that arguing would just make Russia hurt Poland even more… that chance wasn’t worth taking. It just wasn’t
( ... )
No Mercy, Part 6/7
anonymous
May 21 2009, 08:44:15 UTC
“You have to learn,” he repeated, looking over Poland’s shoulder at Lithuania. “You both have to learn.”
“Oh, God,” breathed Poland. Lithuania shivered, because he could hear it-it had finally sunk in. Poland finally realized that this was going to happen, no matter how much he struggled. There was nothing he could do to stop it, nothing Lithuania could do, no one that would save him…
Lithuania couldn’t see Russia’s hand, but he could see Poland’s body go rigid with pain and shock, could see his eyes fly wide open, and he could take a pretty good guess at what had just happened. “It will hurt more if you don’t relax,” Russia advised, sounding particularly unconcerned with whether or not Poland took his advice. Well, it wasn’t as though Russia had ever been very interested in sparing Poland pain…
Another finger, another gasp, and Poland began trembling again. “Nie,” he managed weakly, clenching his fists until the knuckles were white as bone. “Nie, nie, nie, nie, proszę, nie…There was fear in his voice, and pain, and humiliation,
( ... )
No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 21 2009, 08:45:15 UTC
Lithuania's breath got caught in his throat as he watched them-it was too much. It was just… too much. “Russia… Russia, please, stop this! You’re hurting him! He... Let him go, please!”
Russia smiled at Lithuania, as he slammed into Poland again and again, and in that moment, Russia was certain that he had seen the Devil himself. “He is reaping… what he sowed,” he replied, voice thick with pleasure and victory.
Lithuania felt as though it went on forever-the terrible knowledge of his own powerlessness, the unchanging smile on Russia’s face, Poland’s barren weeping, the way Poland’s body went limp as blood began to trickle down the inside of his thighs…
And slowly, as he began to acclimate to the pain, Poland’s body became aroused again. Russia noticed-what didn’t Russia notice?, thought Lithuania bitterly-and wrapped a large hand around the smaller nation’s erection, needing only a few strokes to bring the overwhelmed, inexperienced boy over the edge. Thick, wet seed spattered onto his stomach, dripping down from Russia’s
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Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 21 2009, 15:48:31 UTC
I'm not a particular fan of the "Russia = Rapetruck" idea that seems to be so popular, but I do like things with Poland in them. And the subject matter aside - you write well, and particularly your characterization of Poland and Lithuania's thoughs and feelings for him are spot on. I'm particularly happy to see the inclusion of his religion, and the way you made use of it in the drama. This was good enough to keep me reading even though it is far from my favorite genre.
Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 21 2009, 21:16:35 UTC
You're an excellent writer. So much so that I wished this was written the other way around, meaning Russ/Liet+Poland watching. I know, I know, it's been done, but I can't help it. I'm a crazy Liet!torture fan and when I see a talented writer do a good job on a story I can't help but to think about my own favorite kinks. Still, this was very lovely and your characterization of Poland, Russia (I like him as a Rapetruck!) and Lithuania were perfect. If only Lithuania had been more involved in the proceedings it would have been even better but that takes us back to the wished-you'd-done-my-kink train and I salready aid enough about that.
Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 21 2009, 23:32:31 UTC
Man, I usually hate the whole 'Russia is insane, he wants to kill/rape you' idea, but wow. This was really great. I love how you kept on refreshing Poland's strong spirituality and the fact that he and Liet never had sex.
I though it was very well written and in character. Thank you for the amazing read! :D
Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 22 2009, 02:30:23 UTC
this anon is tired of Russia/Lithuania fanfics(there is too many many of them and I'm not the biggest fan of that pairing in any kind of relationship), so reading this was very refreshing. In my opinion that situation like that is much more painful for Lithuania becouse he's so caring person - he was so in character ;__; and Poland! There isn't many fanfics where he's portrayed as a Catholic, I love your view on his character and innocent view of their relationship. Thank you for writing it this way - for me, it was perfect !
Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
May 22 2009, 04:10:28 UTC
as a fan of rapetruck!Ivan and liet/pol, this fill was lovely and heartbreaking. Catholic!anon is catholic and loves (loves loves loves) the inclusion of Poland's religion. Poor Poland... any chance of a continuation? I would just love to see Liet comforting Poland now that this has happened to him ;__;
Re: Writer!Anon
anonymous
May 22 2009, 17:30:43 UTC
If you decide to continue could you mention something about the concept of Poland as the "Christ of Nations"? As embarrasing as it is, it's an important part of polish identity and Poland is not Poland without it (hell, even polish flag represents this - white is for purity and red is for blood - purification through suffering)
Re: No Mercy, Part 7/7 + Notes
anonymous
September 13 2009, 09:42:16 UTC
Oh my... That was brilliant! I'm Polish, so it was kind heartbreaking... But, writer!anon, keep writing! This part about Polish colours, and that Felix is still a virgin... Amazing. I wouldn't even think about our flag colours in this way. Though I don't like Liet (even hate), the way he thought about Poland... Sweet. ;A; Bad!anon is bad and loves this bastard Russia.
Lovely suggestion, anon! Russia/Poland first time/general brutality, Lithuania forced voyeurism. Why haven't I thought of this role-switch before?
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Lithuania shook his head, looked up at Russia pleadingly. “We… We never… Russia, please, stop this!”
“Oh? I… mmm… I thought surely, because you lived together so long… and Poland is very pretty, da? Almost like a girl…” He petted Poland’s cheek, a mocking caress. “It’s a pity he’s not always so quiet. I like him a lot like this, don’t you?”
“No,” Lithuania breathed. He wanted to say more--you’re sick, you can’t do this to him, I like him when he’s free and loud and troublesome and perfect, but he didn’t know if he could get away with it. The chance that arguing would just make Russia hurt Poland even more… that chance wasn’t worth taking. It just wasn’t ( ... )
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“You have to learn,” he repeated, looking over Poland’s shoulder at Lithuania. “You both have to learn.”
“Oh, God,” breathed Poland. Lithuania shivered, because he could hear it-it had finally sunk in. Poland finally realized that this was going to happen, no matter how much he struggled. There was nothing he could do to stop it, nothing Lithuania could do, no one that would save him…
Lithuania couldn’t see Russia’s hand, but he could see Poland’s body go rigid with pain and shock, could see his eyes fly wide open, and he could take a pretty good guess at what had just happened. “It will hurt more if you don’t relax,” Russia advised, sounding particularly unconcerned with whether or not Poland took his advice. Well, it wasn’t as though Russia had ever been very interested in sparing Poland pain…
Another finger, another gasp, and Poland began trembling again. “Nie,” he managed weakly, clenching his fists until the knuckles were white as bone. “Nie, nie, nie, nie, proszę, nie…There was fear in his voice, and pain, and humiliation, ( ... )
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Lithuania's breath got caught in his throat as he watched them-it was too much. It was just… too much. “Russia… Russia, please, stop this! You’re hurting him! He... Let him go, please!”
Russia smiled at Lithuania, as he slammed into Poland again and again, and in that moment, Russia was certain that he had seen the Devil himself. “He is reaping… what he sowed,” he replied, voice thick with pleasure and victory.
Lithuania felt as though it went on forever-the terrible knowledge of his own powerlessness, the unchanging smile on Russia’s face, Poland’s barren weeping, the way Poland’s body went limp as blood began to trickle down the inside of his thighs…
And slowly, as he began to acclimate to the pain, Poland’s body became aroused again. Russia noticed-what didn’t Russia notice?, thought Lithuania bitterly-and wrapped a large hand around the smaller nation’s erection, needing only a few strokes to bring the overwhelmed, inexperienced boy over the edge. Thick, wet seed spattered onto his stomach, dripping down from Russia’s ( ... )
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I though it was very well written and in character. Thank you for the amazing read! :D
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In my opinion that situation like that is much more painful for Lithuania becouse he's so caring person - he was so in character ;__; and Poland! There isn't many fanfics where he's portrayed as a Catholic, I love your view on his character and innocent view of their relationship.
Thank you for writing it this way - for me, it was perfect !
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Though I don't like Liet (even hate), the way he thought about Poland... Sweet. ;A; Bad!anon is bad and loves this bastard Russia.
Go, go, writer!anon, write some more!
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