Hetalia kink meme part 24

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Any - shopping for a slave

[anonymous]

There have been some really good slave fills and prompts on the meme lately. I'd like to see one that focuses on someone going shopping for a slave, whether it's in an auction or whatever. I'd like there to be a focus on how the owner and potential buyer talk about and handle the slave like an item instead of a person. Any characters for any roles are okay.

Worth and cost 1/3

[anonymous]

A/N: Mr Carriedo = Spain, Francis = France, Feliciano = Veneziano, Lovino = Romano, Angélica = Portugal, Tolys = Lithuania, Erika = Lichtenstein, Basch = Switzerland, Veronique = Seychelles. Hope this was what you were looking for, nonnie

Worth and cost 2/3 (wow html fail on that last one, sorry)

[anonymous]

The cells were behind bars so that customers could look inside, and had fabrics in vibrant colors covering the walls, soft carpets and embroidered pillows on the floor. The slaves were naked, since it was important that the customers could see what they were getting, and besides Francis thought they looked more aesthetically pleasing that way. But they were painted and perfumed, their hair curled and braided in styles which were in fashion at the moment

Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

The girl appeared to have made her pick as well, a girl who was just as diminutive as herself, but fair, with hair like wheat albeit regrettably cut short. She led her out of her cell, giving Francis an impatient look when the girl halted as she reached the end of her chain. He called for more servants, unlocking her chains himself, and watched her be lead away. As she passed one cell, the occupant cried out, and suddenly he was at the bars and reaching out for her. "Erika! Erika! Where are you taking her, you bastards

A!A

[anonymous]

Oh, right, and Spain's current slave is Turkey, since that isn't exactly clear.

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

I love it! Such a good take on the whole idea of slavery. I liked that you showed how they had dehumanized the poor people who were slaves in their minds; it definitely seems to fit the request to me.

Also, Francis is exactly how I would expect if he were a slave trader. Interestingly, he's the opposite of my Francis in my Slave AU, but it's still so quintessentially him.

And the touch with Basch and Erika was very nice. I liked how you had their relationship from Hetalia translate into this AU.

I do take a bit of an issue with them calling the slaves 'it;' it is very dehumanizing, but we do still call animals he and she... It's more my personal taste than actually a flaw, though. I found it interesting that Lovino called Tolys a 'him' when everyone else was calling them 'it;' is that a hint at a different point of view?

Anyway, lovely fill, I hope you fill more requests, since you do write well!

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

SCREECH well I. really love your AU, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that you didn't think I was misrepresenting the character and managed with the fill without anyone going rampantly ooc <3

To tell the truth I was on the fence about the "it" thing and it. does look really weird in text on a couple of places, so I appreciate the opinion. And yes, I was trying to hint at that Lovino sees them more as people, which is why he thinks it's scary to own one - you can't control them like you would a pet.

Really, thank you so much <3!

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

Anon this is utterly brilliant. You've written Francis wonderfully, and I love Feliciano-- even though he doesn't talk much, he's still perfectly in-character. Your world-building is wonderful, as well. I do hope you continue this!

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

Thank you so much! I had a lot of twisted fun writing Feliciano being his adorable self in a way that was kind of horrifying, so I'm really glad that came out right ^^ I am definitely writing something that will follow up on the kids and how they handle their new slaves at least <3

OP

[anonymous]

This was wonderful, anon! Francis' characterization and thoughts through the whole process really made this a fascinating read. I couldn't help but like him even though the dehumanization of the slaves was so strongly present. But that's exactly what I wanted!

The other characters were wonderful as well, and I'm impressed by how much characterization you were able to put into such a short story. Lovino in particular was great. And I love the uncommon master/slave combinations you did because these characters don't usually get to interact.

All in all, this was an amazing fill, anon! Thank you so much for writing!

A!A

[anonymous]

YAY, I'm so glad this is what you wanted ^^ Doing this from the slave trader's perspective was a lot of fun, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. And since I wanted the fill to be complete in itself, even if I might write further on it, I wanted to cram as much of the characters in there as I could xD

Thank you so much in turn for this wonderful prompt, nonnie, I had a lot of fun <3

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

I really liked this fill, anon! It's interesting to see multiple perceptions of slaves, not just the 'hate' it and 'love' it variety. (if that makes sense...?) I hope to see future stories in this 'verse from you!

Re: Worth and cost 3/3

[anonymous]

Thank you so much! I was trying to get some differing views in, while still maintaining a learned-from-infancy conviction that slaves are subhuman/basically things <3

FOLLOW-UP FIC HERE

[anonymous]

I started writing a fic to follow this up like I said I would, and if anyone is interested the first part can be found here <3

Potential Second Authornon

[anonymous]

I am the filler of this fill:http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/22430.html?thread=95415710#t95415710

Would it be all right with OP if I set the story in this verse (though with different characters, possibly)?

OP

[anonymous]

Certainly! I love your other fill, so if this prompt inspires you, go wild!