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Hetalia kink meme part 23

Jun 03, 2012 14:54

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hetalia kink meme
part 23

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Let Me Show You What I Can Do anonymous July 29 2012, 08:44:16 UTC

(( Hey! I, um, I’ve never actually written a fic on here before.. To be honest, this is literally my first fanfiction. Ever. Hopefully it’s as good as some of the others around this kink meme! Carmen is fem!Spain. I had to fill this because I love this pairing and I can never find anything for it. Also, this kink sounded really hot ( ... )

Let Me Show You What I Can Do (2/3) anonymous July 29 2012, 08:46:39 UTC

e released her nipple with an audible pop and chuckled deeply ( ... )

Let Me Show You What I Can Do (3/3) anonymous July 29 2012, 08:47:15 UTC

“R-Romano! Lovino ( ... )

Let Me Show You What I Can Do Translations anonymous July 29 2012, 08:50:47 UTC

WHOOPS I FORGOT ////

1 - Lover
2 - Be quiet, shut up
3 - Handsome
4 - Little
5 - Love
6 - My treasure
7 - Little henchmen (servant?)
8 - My darling

I apologize for any mistakes with these, I don't know either Spanish or Italian and I relied on google for them. Thank you!

Re: Let Me Show You What I Can Do Translations anonymous July 29 2012, 16:36:17 UTC

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

I mean

YES YES I LOVE SEXY CONFIDENT ROMANO EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE AND

I mean

this was excellent for a first fic, anon! really! very descriptive and fun, and I loved how Romano made sure of having Spain's permission before doing anything, it was a nice touch<3

and Spain didn't see this one coming, lol - I like it when Spain (in any version) is the one who's a bit more naive...and lol, the ending - ROMA, SO VULGAR

about the Italian, it's correct, as far as I can tell, except for the "Stai zitto!" because it should be "Stai zitta!" since Spain is a woman. And "mio tesoro" should be "tesoro mio", it sounds more natural in this context. Google is very bad at translating idioms, you know - use this site next time: http://www.wordreference.com/iten/tesoro , it usually has also some good tips on usage if you follow the forum links. But I enjoyed the fic a lot anyway, eh!

Re: Let Me Show You What I Can Do Translations anonymous July 31 2012, 18:35:32 UTC

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Anon I'm so happy someone filled this! Not only that but for your first fic it's really really good. I certainly enjoyed it and i love how Spain isn't expecting it while Romano is all too aware he is good at what he's doing. Hot fill!

XDDDD

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