Past-Part Fills Part 7
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Past-Part Fills Part Seven
Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.
Link to the original request (and if an ongoing fill, any previous chapters/sections).
Don't forget to link your new fill at the fill ( Read more... )
Chapters 13-29: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/20706.html?thread=85993954#t85993954
Ahh, I fail. Some chapters take longer to get out than others for some reason. >_< The last, like, 4-5 chapters of the fic already have a large chunk of them written, from a while back. So once we get to that point, chapters should come in a somewhat more timely fashion. lol... Every look felt suspicious, every unrecognizable word accusatory. Alfred firmly told himself over and over that he was just being paranoid, and continued to walk through the enemy camp, not letting any of his worry show. Fortunately, he already had decent training as an actor. As a beggar, he had a smile for everyone, however they treated him. Though back then, it had sometimes been beneficial to let ( ... )
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“Er...” The quivering soldier looked baffled at the lack of response. “Y-yes, Your Majesty. Um, the Queen has suggested setting a trap for whoever's rescuing them. Moving the remaining prisoners to another tent, and having several of our men waiting for him instead.”
Ivan waved a dismissive hand. “Don't bother, it isn't worth that much effort. Just double the number of guards ( ... )
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I'm also starting to fear for the two boys, I guess I got calmed down too much by the fairytale atmosphere to realize you are perfectly capable of killing your characters, so I'll just hope for the best, they grew on me a lot.
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You know what, I love your Russia. You make him a bit creepy, but with an air of childness that makes you feel sorry for him.
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The soldier to his right, Robert, chuckled. “The Queen cooks?”
“No,” Alfred said quickly. “That's the problem.”
The men gathered around him laughed, one clapping Alfred on the shoulder. Smiling, Alfred stood, waving at the soldiers passing by who bid him good morning.
His ever increasing popularity would be a lot more satisfying if he had actually finished his last mission. Alfred couldn't look around at all the faces without picturing the five that weren't there.
As if sensing his mood, another soldier - a Diamonds man, Alfred could never keep their foreign names straight, but he recalled that it was something like Laurent - looked worried. “Are you still planning on going back?” The other soldiers looked their way, also vocalizing their concern.
“Yes, of course,” Alfred said, feeling awkward in the face of all of those... almost accusing eyes.. Normally he didn't mind being the center ( ... )
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“Y-Your Majesty!” Both men bowed low as Ivan approached.
“Hello.” Ivan peered down at the map, eyes narrowing as he examined the two armies face-to-face. “Right, because head-on battles have worked so well for us...”
“Your Majesty?”
Ivan rearranged the green army a bit. “Start out that way, get them comfortable in the usual battle, then attack from the sides, too.”
The general nodded quickly. “Of course, Your Majesty, we-”
“And tell your archers to stop being so obsessed with aiming for small armored men. Go for the horses.” They really needed to incorporate more armor into their army's uniform, too ( ... )
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Matthew, I like the role that he's playing.
OMG! O_O *goes and hides* Ivan...*quivers* Ivan scares me...a lot. And, Elizabeta scares me just as much, but in an entirely different way.
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But um, let's see...Alfred you brave soul!! Be stealthy and safe please! Arthur should soo visit him on the battlefield, only he won't tell him it's for him but for the troops. Tsundere forever. *dreams on*
I really like Elizabeta and Ivan's relationship in this. They're more like siblings then actual spouses, which is very cute.
Please update soon! I can't wait for more. <3
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It's moving, the Plot is never boring, there so much Romance and Adventure without one or the other getting less! I love it!
It's creepy how perfect you write Ivan. And that I start to like him just like Matt does, even-though he's.. well.. Russia! xC
And Hungary too, I like her background. She really seems like a battle-queen, not like a evil-mad queen, what I imagined first.
God, I'm curious if there will be any plot with Ivan/Eliza/Gilbert! *huffs*
Please continue this masterpiece!
Sorry, forgot the anonymous /ashamed
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