Hetalia kink meme part 21

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Mea Culpa [1a/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 02:20:50 UTC

A/N: I don't even know what this is anymore. Well, it's going to be two monologues and one actual scene, but beyond that… (Hope you still enjoy. Also, I'm neither of the previous anons, but I hope they're coming back with something happier and more prompt-relevant)

First of all, I'm going to preface this by saying everything could have been avoided. I could have easily just stood and walked away. He wouldn't have stopped me. He wouldn't have stopped me and then it would have all been over. But I was too weak, too weak and much too foolish. I couldn't bear to hurt the boy who meant so much to me. So when he woke me with his unconscious flailing and whimpering I, of course, stayed to comfort him. He'd never been in a real war before, so he was sure to have nightmares. I petted his sweaty brow and he moaned.

I really should have noticed earlier, but even a fool knows people don't moan like that when they have nightmares.

He began to rub against my thigh, desperate for friction. Thankfully we both had nightshirts on so I didn't actually have ( ... )

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Mea Culpa [1b/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 02:21:28 UTC

America opened his mouth to ask what I meant, but I kissed him before he could. It wasn't closed-mouthed and chaste like his had been. It was heavy, hot, and I'm sorry to say with full tongue. America let out a gasp and then a moan, shuddering against my body. He'd never been kissed before, had he?

I pulled away before I could worry about how that realization made me feel, "Hush, now. We don't want the men to hear us."

"Oh, England…" He was already panting, eyes half-lidded, and cheeks wonderfully red.

"On the mat," I whispered, "It'll be more comfortable if you're lying down."

America scrambled, quickly crawling past me and onto our messy sheets. He spread his legs and looked up eagerly.

"Dear Lord," I whispered more to myself than him, "You don't even know."

"I don't know what?"

I crawled over him and stroked his cheek, "How to do this."

He scowled, "I do too! I've seen all kinds of animals and once I got curious and followed a couple of kids back to the girl's dad's barn and-"

I placed a finger his mouth, "You've seen sex," I whispered, " ( ... )

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Mea Culpa [1c/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 02:22:12 UTC

I didn't ask why I was different, why I had succeeded where others had failed. I didn't ask when I pressed my fingers inside of him, or when we moved together and he chanted my name over and over, or when he came early but let me keep fucking him until I finally followed him, or even when we lay next to each other afterwards even when he started talking again.

"Hey England?"

"Yes, my pet?"

"Could we do this again some time?"

I rolled back over and looked at him. His eyes were half-closed and he was smiling again, still absolutely euphoric, "I'd like that."

He beamed even wider, "I'm glad."

"But listen, America," He opened his eyes, "No one can know about us, understand? No one. Not even your brother."

"Why?"

"Because you're my bloody colony and I just slept with you." I wanted to say, but I had to lie. I didn't want him to be mad. "It's dangerous."

"I don't care."

"Please, America," I looked at him seriously, "You know that most of Europe hates me and wants nothing more than to see me hurt. Who knows what they'd do to you?"

"I'm strong, England ( ... )

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Re: Mea Culpa [1c/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 02:50:34 UTC
Um, this looks well-written and everything, but I would have really appreciated a warning for consent issues / underage sex. Kiddie porn makes me sad and traumatized, bro. :(

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Re: Mea Culpa [1c/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 06:39:15 UTC
I dunno, if this happens quite near to the American Revolutionary War, America should be around 15 years old here. Still kinda underage, but not...9-10 years old kind of pedo-sex.

I think the issue here is the vagueness of the timeline of the event. A was is mentioned in the beginning...is it the Seven Years' War? happened about 12 years before the Revolutionary War.

Personally I like the fill just fine. The dialogue-like ending referring to Japan confuses me tho. Is the author trying to refer to the Anglo-Japanese Alliance? My only concrit about this fill is it'll be better to make clearer references to the timeline to avoid confusion :)

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Re: Mea Culpa [1c/3] anonymous November 2 2011, 09:26:59 UTC
Oh. My. God. I have to tell you, I completely love this fill. And I don't even usually like first-person narrative, but it actually works for your purposes here. This is just haunting and guilt-ridden and juicy and everything I love about sexy angst. (Hahah do I sound like a terrible person yet?) But really, great job here.

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A!A anonymous November 2 2011, 11:26:55 UTC
Sorry about the timeline thing. I THOUGHT I had it in the A/N, but somehow it disappeared 0_o

anyway...

Yes, this is during the seven years war, at which point canonically he's an adult (I personally put him at about 17 then, 19 post civil war, and actually 21 or so modern day)

However, both England's and America's actual stories were collected in the 1920s, hence the Anglo-Japanese alliance (there end up being more references in America's part, due to him being America)

Sorry for the confusion.

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