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Hetalia kink meme part 20

Jun 03, 2012 14:52

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hetalia kink meme
part 20

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Paint the Story I wish to Read 1/? anonymous September 23 2011, 14:26:32 UTC

Midnight filler strikes again. Per request no rapetruck Russia,though it does take place in an AU where the British Empire never fell ( ... )

Re: Paint the Story I wish to Read 1/? anonymous September 23 2011, 18:52:41 UTC

Love the start so far.

Re: Paint the Story I wish to Read 1/? anonymous September 23 2011, 21:44:15 UTC

I absolutely love this regardless of there being so little of it so far; the alternative history is already decidedly smashing and I'm loving the inclusion of India. Your America-voice is dead-on, too.

OP here anonymous September 24 2011, 09:06:52 UTC

This is a lovely start. I must admit I didn't envision this possibility, but whoa, is it ever great! Poor America, worrying over nothing like that...

Re: Paint the Story I wish to Read 1/? anonymous September 25 2011, 07:24:31 UTC

Good beginning, can't wait for the rest.^^

Paint the Story I wish to Read 2/3 anonymous September 30 2011, 01:07:15 UTC

England's not sure what's happening. On one hand America is here, sitting at the world's table, a young up and coming power in his own right. He's proud of his young lover, who wouldn't be? After all, it isn't every day a nation slowly becomes a power through peace, not through war. America is bringing a new way forward to the world as he works with his brother to come up with the new technologies that keep improving the standards of life ( ... )

Paint the Story I wish to Read 3/3 anonymous September 30 2011, 01:09:32 UTC

Canada knows what is going on, even if America and England don't. India had never made any bones about her desire to make England suffer, her want to see him as broken as she'd been. When her own magic proved that she couldn't force her way pass his protections she'd begun to look for other ways of making him miserable ( ... )

OP again! anonymous September 30 2011, 23:30:17 UTC

This was very niii~ce! I feel for India, actually, probably more than you intended your readers to feel. But she REALLY should have kept America out of it.

Re: Paint the Story I wish to Read 3/3 anonymous October 3 2011, 13:45:06 UTC

I felt so sorry for everyone! America, because he was the one being hurt, England, because he couldn't understand why America acted like that, and India, because she had been so hurt by England that she now hated him and couldn't look past that fact.

I was surprised by you choosing India but it seemed to fit.

One of the lines I most remember from this fill is: It's time someone grew up. It might as well be him.

I only wish that there could be more, like what happened afterwards.

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