Re: Greece/Japan – salaryman AU
anonymous
September 5 2011, 06:20:36 UTC
Awww.... this was a really cute and funny fill, A!A. I like it quite a fair bit - it actually reads off a bit like those sweet, dreamy doujinshi <3
"Idiot me!" He slapped himself. At the sudden sound, the Greek woke up. His olive eyes bore into the other man's once again. "...don't call... yourself... that..." He wrapped his arms around Kiku's and pulled him close. He started kissing up his arms. The Japanese man starting swatting at him. "What do you think you're doing in a public place!?" "Meeting you..." "Ask me what my name is, please!" "What... is your name?" "Honda Kiku. And yours?" He stared off in a different direction to avoid anyone seeing his bright red face. "Heracles... Karpusi." "Now we know each other." "May we... go back... to kissing?"
This part made me giggle so much lol. Aaaah Greeece <3
But my most fave part of the fic was this: Life was one big ball of thread you spent your entire life trying to untwine. Only fools would stop and smell the roses; when they turned back to the thread, it would be gone. That was
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Re: Greece/Japan – salaryman AU
anonymous
September 14 2011, 22:02:13 UTC
While there were a couple of grammar mistakes in here that niggled at me and I think the kissing occurred a little too quickly, this was overall a decent exploration piece and I liked most of Japan's characterization here. Although you might want to put a title in the fill post's header next time, author anon. :)
Human AU with Salaryman romance. I'd love to see something like a chance meeting on the subway-- maybe with Greece falling asleep on Japan?
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"Idiot me!" He slapped himself. At the sudden sound, the Greek woke up. His olive eyes bore into the other man's once again.
"...don't call... yourself... that..." He wrapped his arms around Kiku's and pulled him close. He started kissing up his arms. The Japanese man starting swatting at him.
"What do you think you're doing in a public place!?"
"Meeting you..."
"Ask me what my name is, please!"
"What... is your name?"
"Honda Kiku. And yours?" He stared off in a different direction to avoid anyone seeing his bright red face.
"Heracles... Karpusi."
"Now we know each other."
"May we... go back... to kissing?"
This part made me giggle so much lol. Aaaah Greeece <3
But my most fave part of the fic was this:
Life was one big ball of thread you spent your entire life trying to untwine. Only fools would stop and smell the roses; when they turned back to the thread, it would be gone. That was ( ... )
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But thank you, this is a really cute little snippet, Japan's inner thoughts are done really well, and Greece is super cute here. Thanks~
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