Re: Punishment [18d/19]
anonymous
October 27 2011, 22:21:52 UTC
Asjfhsjdkhfdjshfjkdfhjdhfjh!!! I thought this had been abandoned, but then someone posted a link in the last part to here. I'm so excited that I had to comment first before I start reading. I've been checking back regularly in hopes of an update. Thank you so much for continuing, author!anon! <3 <3
Punishment [19a/19]
anonymous
November 5 2011, 21:08:28 UTC
Alfred and Arthur fought over the size of their bed even before the house was ready to move into. Tino had watched in fascination when they had gone over measurements and types, looking at the books he had bought them while arguing over what constituted too big and cramped.
It really wasn’t a surprise that Alfred wanted a smaller bed (queen-sized, Tino had repeatedly told them) to sleep on. Tino had walked in on the two curled up on the floor between their cots on quite a few mornings, and while Arthur would flee if he was woken, Alfred would simply smile lazily at Tino before pulling Arthur closer and wrapping himself around him
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Punishment [19b/19]
anonymous
November 5 2011, 21:09:41 UTC
They moved in as soon as the interior walls were finished. It had been an awkward but long overdue goodbye to Tino and Berwald (which wasn’t really a goodbye considering they were simply moving to a nearby house), made more awkward by the almost silent hours that followed after they had moved into their own house alone
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Punishment [19d/19] End
anonymous
November 5 2011, 21:16:19 UTC
“You won’t.” Arthur squeezed Alfred’s hand and looked down. He fought back unpleasant memories and the ghost of the pain he had felt. “You won’t. I promise.”
“But last time-“
“Last time was different.” Arthur took a deep breath and ordered Alfred to do the same.
Alfred slipped his hand down beside Arthur’s knee and he stopped moving.
“It’s okay, Alfred.” Arthur leaned forward slightly and pressed his lips against Alfred’s forehead. “It’s okay.”
Re: Punishment [19d/19] End
anonymous
November 7 2011, 00:08:28 UTC
It's finally the end, I love how you've been updating so many of your fics lately <3 Thank you anon! I am in love with this fill, it's my favorite one in the meme. The ending, it's fitting because it didn't end with everything for Alfred and Arthur as perfect. They've been given a second chance at their happy ending and if they get there or not is all up to them now :)
Thank you for writing this. It's been a wonderful read. (And I can't wait for the edited version on ff.net <3)
Re: Punishment [19d/19] End
anonymous
November 12 2011, 01:10:58 UTC
I can't believe this finally ended. The ending was just wow-kind of bittersweet but not. I am now wondering why Berward could see Arthur (I really hope he isn't dying). I'll be looking on ff.net as well.
Really dark. Warning for sex, and dub-con/noncon. Totally went off track with the request.
Request and all fills: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=50693049#t50693049
Direct to "Law" and Sequel "Punishment" (Parts 1-11): http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=51562169#t51562169
Part Twelve: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17465.html?thread=56364345#t56364345
Part Thirteen: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/18772.html?thread=69462356#t69462356
Only two more parts, promise to finish them soon because I'm trying to finish everything asap.
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I'm curious about Arthur losing his wings - is he going to stop being an angel? What about Alfred, will he lose his demon powers as well?
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This anon is looking forward to an update! :D I totally, totally, totally love this fic. ( ;w; )
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It really wasn’t a surprise that Alfred wanted a smaller bed (queen-sized, Tino had repeatedly told them) to sleep on. Tino had walked in on the two curled up on the floor between their cots on quite a few mornings, and while Arthur would flee if he was woken, Alfred would simply smile lazily at Tino before pulling Arthur closer and wrapping himself around him ( ... )
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“But last time-“
“Last time was different.” Arthur took a deep breath and ordered Alfred to do the same.
Alfred slipped his hand down beside Arthur’s knee and he stopped moving.
“It’s okay, Alfred.” Arthur leaned forward slightly and pressed his lips against Alfred’s forehead. “It’s okay.”
It hurt. There was no denying that ( ... )
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Thank you for writing this. It's been a wonderful read. (And I can't wait for the edited version on ff.net <3)
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