Minvade 35: Hear no Evil [b] [part 20]
anonymous
October 8 2011, 16:43:39 UTC
America shifted under him, and England clung on for dear life. He hummed under his breath, and suddenly a shy series of taps at his lower back. You look like your enjoying this.
Wrinkling his nose, England rolled his eyes under the blindfold. "Y-O-U apostrophe R-E."
Fuck you.
England gawked at him. "You already are!"
O.
They waited uncomfortably against each other for a few moments.
"Isn't there more to that message?" England finally muttered.
Oh.
England sighed. "Right, right," He paused. "I'm going to try and get your gag off, if that's alright? Then you can get mine off." England's handcuffs jangled as he shifted forward, and how he wished he was wearing something. He was practically grinding America as he felt around with his teeth for the edges of the gag. "By the way, why don't you simply break free?"
My head hurts. Esugde- America's fingers stuttered, and he rubbed slightly. That rub means forget the last sentence. Drugs. America's arms raised away from England's sides for a second, then flopped back, boneless. America
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Minvade 35: Hear no Evil [c] [part 20]
anonymous
October 8 2011, 16:47:23 UTC
England blinked, the flush already coiling over his cheeks brightening, and spreading a little further across his face. "We're not going to get anything done until we sated." His voice sounded a bit foreign, even if it was talking sense. Well some form of sense. England ground into America, his back muscles rippling slightly as he rocked forward. "So damn it, come already." America half-yelped, and half-moaned at the movement. England rocked back.
"W-wait." America whined. "D-don't." His head lolled back, leaving his throat exposed and England promptly bit it. The strength turned to jelly in his arms, America simply writhed, eliciting a sharp keen from England. "England." America said with as much authority as he could muster under the circumstances. "Please, stop
( ... )
Re: Minvade 35: Hear no Evil [fin] [part 20]
anonymous
October 21 2011, 16:41:30 UTC
I for one really liked it. I felt you handle very well and I'm glad they didn't confess their love and that it was awkward and horrible for both of them. Cookies for you.
Re: Minvade 35: Hear no Evil [fin] [part 20]
anonymous
October 22 2011, 09:50:22 UTC
That was incredibly hot, but at the same time you managed the turmoil of emotions they were going through pretty well, authoranon! I loved that you made it awkward instead of going to the easy "rape is love" path. Everything felt more real that way, and more IC.
Also I loved the beggining, with the morse-communicating part and England being himself and correcting America, even in such situation!
Re: Minvade 35: Hear no Evil [fin] [part 20]
anonymous
October 22 2011, 21:52:26 UTC
This made me feel uncomfortable and sad and weirdly happy that this request was filled. You did a good job anon and really paid attention to the fact that neither America and England consented to it. And them crying at the end!
OMG. OMG. I love you! You've filled it, I literally died when I saw this at the usxuk community. I was like, that sounds like my request and then I started reading and I just died anon. I died. I love you <3. I love their whole interaction and I love how I mean it's still full on smut but there's like character and ugh I'm so bad at describing myself, but this is gold. My first request to be filled by someone. Once again, I love you anon T___T LOVE.
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Wrinkling his nose, England rolled his eyes under the blindfold. "Y-O-U apostrophe R-E."
Fuck you.
England gawked at him. "You already are!"
O.
They waited uncomfortably against each other for a few moments.
"Isn't there more to that message?" England finally muttered.
Oh.
England sighed. "Right, right," He paused. "I'm going to try and get your gag off, if that's alright? Then you can get mine off." England's handcuffs jangled as he shifted forward, and how he wished he was wearing something. He was practically grinding America as he felt around with his teeth for the edges of the gag. "By the way, why don't you simply break free?"
My head hurts. Esugde- America's fingers stuttered, and he rubbed slightly. That rub means forget the last sentence. Drugs. America's arms raised away from England's sides for a second, then flopped back, boneless. America ( ... )
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"W-wait." America whined. "D-don't." His head lolled back, leaving his throat exposed and England promptly bit it. The strength turned to jelly in his arms, America simply writhed, eliciting a sharp keen from England. "England." America said with as much authority as he could muster under the circumstances. "Please, stop ( ... )
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Cookies for you.
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Also I loved the beggining, with the morse-communicating part and England being himself and correcting America, even in such situation!
<3
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Now I really want a happy ending.
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LOVE.
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