Click. Click. Swiiiiiish. The door swung open with a sigh, groaning under the combined weight of the two people pressed against its old hinges. The classroom was shrouded in darkness, the only light filtering in through the windows up in the corners of the room. The new occupants of the room stumbled through the darkness, all moans and whispers and breaths, until they hit the edge of one of the desks and toppled over on top of it. There was a clink clank clunk as a set of keys tripped down the desk and slid across dusty linoleum, into a sliver of light from the windows
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Re: [Part 17] Click, Click, Swish (1/2)
anonymous
June 11 2011, 20:14:26 UTC
Heracles reared his head back and opened glowing eyes, staring at the posters behind him and letting himself go, relishing in the contact and the pleasure and the touches and licks and nips and every inch of him was electrified.
“Oh my G-God, Kiku-!” and he dug his nails into the edge of the desk with a loud scrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaatch, for Kiku had taken to using his tongue along his nipples and it felt ridiculously good. Soon their talking had ceased and it came to needy, desperate pants, low moans and the sound of skin-on-skin-on-fake wood squeaking-on-linoleum. The adhesive on the posters closest to the ground-an old, old map of the world, sepia-toned and faded-began to fail as the humidity rose in the room with each haggard gasp of breath.
Kiku suddenly sat up straight and shucked his navy-blue blazer with a swiiiish crumple as it fell to the floor. His pressed dress shirt was still mostly buttoned and his tie was around his shoulders, partially undone. He leaned forward, his eyes rolling back into his head with a groan and kissed
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Re: [Part 17] Click, Click, Swish (1/2)
anonymous
June 11 2011, 21:47:21 UTC
May I worship you, author!anon? Not only did you make the desk sex hot, you made Japan the one on top (YES YES) and you injected a good dose of humor in there too without detracting from the hotness. The POV of the poor classroom materials was quite unique and amusing, and I liked it that Kiku was apparently so caught up in the heat of the moment that he didn't realize that they were doing it on his own desk. XD
Re: [Part 17] Click, Click, Swish (1/2)
anonymous
June 12 2011, 01:59:19 UTC
this was absolutely brilliant! loved the pov of the classroom and i loved how the details of their surroundings fell neatly into place with what they were doing. and yes, it was very, very hot :D
Click. Click. Swiiiiiish. The door swung open with a sigh, groaning under the combined weight of the two people pressed against its old hinges. The classroom was shrouded in darkness, the only light filtering in through the windows up in the corners of the room. The new occupants of the room stumbled through the darkness, all moans and whispers and breaths, until they hit the edge of one of the desks and toppled over on top of it. There was a clink clank clunk as a set of keys tripped down the desk and slid across dusty linoleum, into a sliver of light from the windows ( ... )
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“Oh my G-God, Kiku-!” and he dug his nails into the edge of the desk with a loud scrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaatch, for Kiku had taken to using his tongue along his nipples and it felt ridiculously good. Soon their talking had ceased and it came to needy, desperate pants, low moans and the sound of skin-on-skin-on-fake wood squeaking-on-linoleum. The adhesive on the posters closest to the ground-an old, old map of the world, sepia-toned and faded-began to fail as the humidity rose in the room with each haggard gasp of breath.
Kiku suddenly sat up straight and shucked his navy-blue blazer with a swiiiish crumple as it fell to the floor. His pressed dress shirt was still mostly buttoned and his tie was around his shoulders, partially undone. He leaned forward, his eyes rolling back into his head with a groan and kissed ( ... )
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but would it have been better if it was someone else's desk? *ponders this*
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