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[Part 18] Remember Your Place (1)

[anonymous]

The prompt: "During his revolution, England makes America wet himself, to humiliating him."America awoke with a groan, he had a horrible headache and no idea why. The last thing he remembered was the battlefield, his men against England's, he remembered England was also there, anger showing in his green eyes. He remembered England charging at him, coming towards him and then...nothing, that's all he could remember

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (2)

[anonymous]

"I am not a child, you need to accept that I am growing up and you can't control me anymore," America said, raising his voice, angry at the fact that England seemed so...so calm. "Why am I tied up in here anyways? You can torture me all you want, you know I won't confess anything nor will I give up!" he said, figuring that's what he was there for, an interrogation

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (3)

[anonymous]

"Alfred, I'm not going to hurt you." Once again, England couldn't help but sigh as he pulled up a chair to sit in front of his set of colonies. "I'll probably give you a good caning once this is over, but if you're afraid that I'm going to use something such as the rack, you can be at ease. You're not my enemy, Alfred. Not like France. Ha, now HIM I wouldn't mind torturing..." He chuckled and gave America a pat on the head. All he had to do was remind Alfred that he was still just a child. The poor lad... Though he was clearly trying to hide it, England was old enough to recognize the fear. "Now, why don't you relax and have some tea? I have a kettle of hot water ready in the kitchen. I'll even add some sugar for you. How does that sound

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (4)

[anonymous]

"You're not the only one who's been on the battlefield, Alfred. Do you think it's easy for me, being so far from my own land to do harm to my own colony?" asked England, eyes narrowing. He still refused to call it a 'war.' "I HAVE allowed you to get stronger, Alfred! I want you to be able to better protect yourself, without needing me as much as you currently do! You, however, take that as permission to venture further west and pester those savages! AND France! Who, by the way, is very EXPENSIVE to fight so unnecessarily! I will give you representation when you can make responsible decisions, something you have yet to show me that you can do!" He stepped back and took a deep breath. "I'm going to go get the tea... While I'm gone, I want you to think about what you've done, and what you're costing the both of us." He turned around and left the room without another word. If there was one thing America could do without fail, it was give him a headache

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (5)

[anonymous]

England exhaled. His little set of American colonies could be so unreasonable sometimes! It was hard to believe he was Matthew's twin. "Alfred, what did I say about foul language? It's not going to get you anywhere. Do you think this is some sort of a novel? Do you think you're being the hero right now, Alfred? Do you think I enjoy slaughtering my little brother's people? This is NOT a game, Alfred, but you certainly are treating it like one. Do you want to know what happens in a real war? Because I could go on for hours about all the things I've seen. All the things I've DONE, Alfred. Do you know what happens in wars? People are captured, much like the American soldiers currently being held at gunpoint in another room. Do you know what happens to the people who are captured? They're tortured, Alfred. I don't want to torture you... But if I need to use your people as an example, you can sit and watch what your own immaturity has brought upon you. Now..." England continued, taking a moment to relax once again. "How

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (6)

[anonymous]

"There you go. See? Easy," England said softly, pulling the cup away. "Now, I know you're going to hate hearing this word, but I promise it isn't as bad as it sounds... I think it's about time we had a talk about your surrender. The both of us know how this is going to end if you don't, and I don't want that to happen. You have such a beautiful land! Neither of us want to see that turned to ash, but I can only hold the king back for so long

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (7)

[anonymous]

Finally, finally it stopped and America's pants were left covered in urine, his chair and the floor around him were as well. Tears sprang to his eyes again, falling down his face at the realization at what had just happened. "I-It was an accident, I told you to let me go, you wouldn't let me go!" he said, still in shock

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (8)

[anonymous]

It was at least ten minutes before England returned. "I had several people drawing the water, so it's already prepared. Are you ready to get out of the chair now, or do you need a little longer?" He waited in the doorway for a response, ready to leave if America began to yell again. There were ways to discipline a child that didn't involve physical contact. For one such as his little brother, ignoring him until he calmed down always seemed to be an effective strategy

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (9)

[anonymous]

"They're all either busy with their duties or busy guarding the rooms where your people are locked up. Don't worry," England added, smiling. "They'll be released after everything is finalized, I promise. This way." He turned around and led the way out of the room, checking the hallway to make sure it was empty. "Excuse me? You," England told the soldier standing guard outside. "I have everything under control here, you're dismissed." He didn't want to embarrass America any more after finally calming him down

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (10)

[anonymous]

"It's alright, I understand," said England, nodding. "You may come along, if you want. I worded the letter as delicately as I could... Now, I think it's about time you dried off. The water is probably getting cold." He set down a set of folded, wool clothing for the younger to wear to bed. The discussion that he knew had to happen regarding the actions to be taken in fixing the whole mess could wait until tomorrow. It had been a long day for the both of them. His poor brother was probably tired, and he had a lot of work that would be best done uninterrupted. "There's some spare hardtack from the journey over, and plenty of water, but not too much else, I'm afraid. We're still awaiting more supplies." They couldn't get any from the colonists for obvious reasons

[Part 18] Remember Your Place (11 - FINAL)

[anonymous]

America sat on the bed and waited, wishing England would stop bringing up the war, the war that he should have never started in the first place. After all, he couldn't even control his body, how could he control a whole nation had he won

Not OP, but:

[anonymous]

\o/ YESSSS SOMEONE FILLED THIS. *fistpump* This hit my super-secret kink while being kind of sweet at the same time. You win, authoranon!

Re: [Part 18] Remember Your Place (11 - FINAL)

[anonymous]

Very well done and descriptive. I could see how in a moment of weakness Alfred could be coaxed into trusting Arthur...

My only problem with this was the ending. What would trigger Alfred into wanting to fight England again? Unless this is an alternate universe where America doesn't win independence?

But don't get me wrong. I did overall really like this fill. :)

OP

[anonymous]

So sorry for not commenting earlier, I totally missed this.

This was so, so good anon. I have such a humiliation and wetting kink, and this was just the sort of thing I was hoping for. Seriously, well written and I love how Arthur manipulated Alfred like that. Just... <33

(Also, did you link this in the fills list? I didn't see it there, and if you didn't, it'd be awesome if you did - it's so good, I'm sure others would want to read)

Re: [Part 18] Remember Your Place (11 - FINAL)

[anonymous]

Wow... This was awesome. I liked the balance of manipulative Imperial!England and the concern for his younger brother. Alfred's reactions seemed IC to me, as were England's.

I'd really like to see Washington's (and the other's) reactions to Alfred surrendering to Arthur and how the meeting between them would go.