Do you know how it is when you see someone on the bus, tube or train and you just see someone who is perfect. And you can't stop looking? Well, I want Highschooler!Alfred to be infatuated by Office-working!Arthur, someone he sees every day while travelling (Alfred is 16/17 and Arthur is in his 20s). I want to see Alfred trying to woo Arthur and lying about his age. And succeeding! How long does the lie last is up to A!A.
Smut is more than appreciated. Happy ending, please!
Bonus 1: Arthur totally gets off on the age difference even if he feels guilty about it Bonus 2: Nerd!Alfred. I love Nerd!Alfred. Tags: request
Author!anon wanted to say
anonymous
February 6 2011, 05:58:51 UTC
Dear OP, I'm anon who seconded your awesome prompt! I have to admit that I just couldn't stop thinking about it and suddenly BAM! I had a plot in mind and I had to pour it out. And now I have plans, lots of plans, OP! Mwahahaha! But I also have exams, lots of exams! XD So I probably will not update as fast as I'd like. Also this will probably become a long fill, I hope you were not asking for some straight PWP :_D
I'll probably include the first bonus. And the regarding the second one, well, I want to make Alfred interested in literature, I hope you're fine with it! :D
Well, I hope I have not failed too much X_D
(Also if some anon could tell me how to put words into cursive I would be eternally grateful, Html has always been confusing for me >_< )
Author!Anon, this is wonderful. You have no idea how wonderful it is. Of course I don't mind a long fill (I love them) and don't worry about being busy: I'm in uni and I know that studying takes up a lot of time.
I'm in love with what you have written. The tone is great, Alfred's voice is perfect and the mood is just 100% awesome. Also, and this is my nerdism coming up, Henry V is one of my favourite plays ever, so I don't think I can begin to explain you how joyful your choice has made me. I have a gigantic smile plastered on my face. Lit!Alfred is great, of course.
The html thing: you have to type <*i>THE WORD<*/i>, without the asterisks. I hope I've been of help.
Ah! Don't forget to list this in the Fill List, so other people can see it!
Re: Author!anon wanted to say
anonymous
February 6 2011, 06:18:54 UTC
A!a, this was one of the best dialogue-less starts of a fanfic I've ever seen. Great setting, great descriptions, great ideas, you are definitely doing this right.
A very promising start, bookmarking and waiting patiently for more.
Re: Curiosity (2/?)
anonymous
February 7 2011, 05:54:01 UTC
You talking about plotting and plotting sounds so exciting, I can't wait!! I'm enjoying this fill immensely, a!a, and I think the other comments show I'm not the only one.
Do you know how it is when you see someone on the bus, tube or train and you just see someone who is perfect. And you can't stop looking? Well, I want Highschooler!Alfred to be infatuated by Office-working!Arthur, someone he sees every day while travelling (Alfred is 16/17 and Arthur is in his 20s). I want to see Alfred trying to woo Arthur and lying about his age. And succeeding! How long does the lie last is up to A!A.
Smut is more than appreciated. Happy ending, please!
Bonus 1: Arthur totally gets off on the age difference even if he feels guilty about it
Bonus 2: Nerd!Alfred. I love Nerd!Alfred.
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I'll probably include the first bonus. And the regarding the second one, well, I want to make Alfred interested in literature, I hope you're fine with it! :D
Well, I hope I have not failed too much X_D
(Also if some anon could tell me how to put words into cursive I would be eternally grateful, Html has always been confusing for me >_< )
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I'm in love with what you have written. The tone is great, Alfred's voice is perfect and the mood is just 100% awesome. Also, and this is my nerdism coming up, Henry V is one of my favourite plays ever, so I don't think I can begin to explain you how joyful your choice has made me. I have a gigantic smile plastered on my face. Lit!Alfred is great, of course.
The html thing: you have to type <*i>THE WORD<*/i>, without the asterisks. I hope I've been of help.
Ah! Don't forget to list this in the Fill List, so other people can see it!
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A very promising start, bookmarking and waiting patiently for more.
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This looks so promising!
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Poor Al, so nervous and unsure of himself. But still braver than I am, actually trying to initiate a conversation with a hot stranger. You go, boy ♥
I don't mind Alfred being a virgin at all. To be honest, I love Virgin!Al :D
This story looks so amazing, A!A, you are making me incredibly happy.
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I'm loving the update and all the missed opportunities for proper encounter right now in the setup 8DDDD Oh America, you silly boy.
Here's to cheering the two of them on in their quest for loooove~
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