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(Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [1/?] anonymous May 20 2011, 06:04:36 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17942.html?thread=58166038#t58166038

France attempting to date Canada (whether of his own free will or because of a BTT dare or whatever reason anon wants to use) and being rejected/interupted multiple times. Not by Canada or even England; because Kumajirou, of all people, doesn't want him anywhere near Canada after France chose Guadalupe over Canada in 1763.

IDEK what this is.

Falling DownThe Hands clenched tighter in his fur. Rain fell down on his head and the Hands sniffled at his neck. Kumajirou nuzzled one hand carefully. He had never seen the Hands like this; he had never heard the Hands make noises like this. He didn’t like it ( ... )

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [2/?] anonymous May 20 2011, 06:05:35 UTC
“It is all right, Mathieu,” He replied, even though He was still cradling his hand like a youngling. “I will be fine ( ... )

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [3/?] anonymous May 20 2011, 06:06:52 UTC
“What the devil-?” The human bent down and cautiously rubbed Kumajirou’s head. (Kumajirou allowed it without a snap, but the Hands were always the best.) “Aren’t you supposed to be with, Matthew?” The human looked up and the rage was a warm heat around him as he straightened. Without another word to Kumajirou, the human stomped away (the sound like the crash of rocks and ice) and interrupted the Hands and Him with yelling ( ... )

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [4/4] anonymous May 20 2011, 06:07:52 UTC
The Hands’s voice was uneven when he said, “That was a long time ago. It hurt, but…but I understand ( ... )

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [4/4] anonymous May 20 2011, 14:42:20 UTC
The thing I love the most about this, and I love a lot, is that Kumajirou actually knows Matthew, he just associates him with hands. All the 'Who?'ing is actually about other people. Kuma, you are so cute. And a good hunter. *cuddles*

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [4/4] anonymous May 20 2011, 21:34:35 UTC
Like the anon from above, I'm quite fascinated by the concept you used. I never thought much about Kumajiro but you made him to a real character, and I know next to nothing about how much intelligence polar bears usually possess, but he was believable, at least for me. I especially liked the subtle descriptions of Alfred and Arthur.

A really great experiment with an alternative POV.

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Re: (Part 15) FrancexCanada, protective Kumajirou- Falling Down [4/4] anonymous May 25 2011, 18:00:38 UTC
Really enjoyed it! I love how everyone still tries to protect Matthew from Francis

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