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[Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 01:10:00 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/20026.html?thread=73746746

Since yesterday was the 107th anniversary of the Entente Cordiale, I'd like to see how France and England celebrated their anniversary through the years. Bonus for romantic smut and fluff.

This is the second anon who commented on the request.

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Year Zero“Well, then,” says England, arms folded tightly across his chest as if to shield himself ( ... )

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 03:26:58 UTC
Oooh. Oooh. I like this. I like this a lot. The banter between the two, the forced civility, and the unresolved sexual tension in the air, hello. Already looking forward to the next part!

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 05:37:43 UTC
Hehe, this made me smile. I'm bouncing in anticipation for more. <3

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 06:24:51 UTC
Ohh look historicity! Now I'm not the OP, but this is exactly what I expected as I started tracking this prompt.

Definitely looking forward to the next update.

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 10:06:15 UTC
I love this already. Wonderful start, author!anon !!

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 1/9 anonymous May 18 2011, 12:04:01 UTC
Wonderful start, anon! Can't wait for the next part!

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[Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2a/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 00:46:48 UTC
Year Fourteen“France!” England hisses intently - and then, when his call is swallowed by the din of shell-noise, raises his voice. “Dammit, France ( ... )

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[Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 00:47:51 UTC
France chuckles a little and raises his arms with a stifled wince to let England wrap the dressings around his torso. “Our anniversary.”

Predictably, England curses. “This is not our anniversary ( ... )

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 03:54:05 UTC
How I love this ♥ The image of England and France in the trenches, England caring about France and dressing his wounds even when France doesn't care, and France calling England "passionate"... oh I love it all.

Banter, UST, and historicity are my favorite things! :D

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 05:31:47 UTC
I nearly cried as I saw all the delicious, historically correct details you used, authoranon! I don't know if you are a history student or if this is the result of a careful research, but in either case, you are doing an amazing job.

And both France and England are very IC and feel real - because I don't think even France being France would make sexual innuendos in a similar situation. And it's strangely romantic.

Definitely now on my list of most expected updates, I'm really curious what you have planned for the next seven parts.

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 18:54:19 UTC
I always love reading FrUK in the Great War, and this is one of the best pieces I've read. Really well done, anon!

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 21 2011, 20:57:39 UTC
author!anon you do FrUk so perfectly. They obviously care for each other but are still so snarky. I am really enjoying this

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 2b/9 anonymous May 23 2011, 18:41:03 UTC
This chapter may just have been the most natural, in-character piece of FrUK I have ever read. Thank you for making me fall for my OTP all over again.

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[Part 18] Des Vignettes, 3a/9 anonymous May 25 2011, 00:13:10 UTC
Year Twenty-three

France is beginning to wonder whether he has somehow changed his own locks without being aware of it since he left his house earlier that evening. That, he thinks, would explain why he has spent so long struggling with his keys. Of course, the alcohol running and tumbling and generally having a good time inside him may have something to do with it as well, as might the heavy, far-too-familiar weight of England upon him: the arms around his neck, hot breath on his face, the way England is not far off rubbing himself against France’s body.

“Open your damn door,” he slurs, pushes his hips forwards and grids against France’s backside.

France groans, turns his head backwards over his shoulder and drags England into a kiss, all the while thinking something very long, complex and indecipherable about always the same and distracting me and you’re a guest here you know and will this damn door ever open? Frustrated, he pulls out of the kiss and hurls his body at the wood ( ... )

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[Part 18] Des Vignettes, 3b/9 anonymous May 25 2011, 00:14:32 UTC
England tries to scoff, but it comes out choked and disbelieving. “Spain. Italy. All your neighbours, in fact. All of Europe, all your colonies ( ... )

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Re: [Part 18] Des Vignettes, 3b/9 anonymous May 25 2011, 02:18:22 UTC
I love that that is when England chooses to seriously dicuss their relationship. It's such an England thing to do.
But seriously my heart was seriously aching anon. The hesitancy and their reluctance to show their feelings really struck a cord. You write beautifully and capture such wonderful emotion. Already waiting for the next installment

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