All Together Now [10a/18, or "The Author Isn't Dead, Really"]
anonymous
February 23 2011, 05:59:38 UTC
"I think I need more coffee," Finland says, and lets his head drop to the table. It makes a disturbing thud. The sprawl of papers flutters gently, and the bag of salmiakki slips over the edge
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All Together Now [14b/18, or "The Author Will Someday Learn To Type"]
anonymous
February 23 2011, 06:02:39 UTC
He opens the front door to find Sweden looming on the stoop.
They stare at each other for a bit. Sweden's hands are stuck in his pockets, and he has the vaugely terrified look he always gets when someone's health is involved. It's really more terrifying than terrified, but Estonia knows him well. "How is he?" Sweden says.
"Hungover." Estonia frowns. "Weren't you going to fix the woodshed?"
"I did." He half-shrugs, and gestures in that general direction with his elbow.
Estonia nods, and waves him inside. He might as well stay in; Sweden's better at dealing with Finland's temper, but he thinks all three of them should be around, if they're going to bring up damage control. His phone chirps, and he detours to the kitchen. The message is, he realizes with some surprise, from England. So fast? I would gloat but I'm in no position to, it starts. Is it true about Russia, or was Poland having us on? There follows a recipe for his hangover cure.
Estonia has to pull up a dictionary to work out widdershins, and the resulting concoction
( ... )
Oh my god, I'll admit I never though I'd see this update again! But I'm so glad it did.
I love your Finland. So, so much. He's so cool. ♥ He's one of my favorite characters, and I really liked how you wrote him here.
I have a question, though - I mean, it's your fic, and it's lovely, but - is Poland going to show up again? He's - well, she, in this case - is my favorite, which is why I made that request in the first place. Looks like next part is going to be about Prussia, who I'll admit I don't like, but I guess we'll see!
Besides that, isn't it kinda funny that most of the girls/the ones with female bodies are in Central or Eastern Europe, had some link with Russia? I wonder what that means...
Thank you so much for still writing this. I hope the next part won't take this long again, ahah. ;) ;)
The next part focuses on England and his siblings, and is mostly written, but after that it's back to Poland for the remainder! Although we will be seeing more of Prussia.
Honestly, that's just coincidence - I picked them based on characterization, and threw in a few OCs based on who I had headcanon for.
Niiice! I can't wait to see your version of Scotland - I just love that place. And your Ireland seems very interesting too for what we've seen so far, it's gonna be great!
Ahah, well, Spain and South Italy break the pattern, but besides that... or maybe these would just be the ones Finland and Poland would know more about, being closer geographically? Beside China being, well, China, I mean.
All Together Now [15a/18]
anonymous
March 2 2011, 04:25:49 UTC
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"Give that back," England snaps, and makes a grab for his laptop.
Scotland casually moves it to his left hand and holds it away from his brother, who slips from the sofa and falls to the carpet with a horribly undignified thump. "United Kingdom," Scotland says placidly. "If ye don't want that I should read your mail, ye should nae send it from a government-issue laptop."
"It's still my mail, you horrid little wanker!" England scrambles to his feet, and tries to punch Scotland. Scotland can't quite hit back without dropping the laptop; he settles for holding onto England's wrist, brusingly tight. England tries to knee him instead, but overbalances. The resulting crash sends both of them to the floor in a heap of entangled limbs
( ... )
All Together Now [15b/18]
anonymous
March 2 2011, 04:28:24 UTC
"I'm not sure it can be taught," Wales offers solemnly. "You may just have learn to get by with insulting people directly, England." He sighs, looking mournful
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All Together Now [15b/18]
anonymous
March 2 2011, 04:43:04 UTC
Wales taps the pen. "Distinct possibility, but still no good for the betting. Why don't we go down the list?"
They eliminate Greece - sideburns - and the Czech Republic - moustache. Ireland is able to tick off Netherlands and North Italy on the basis of having slept with them, and remembers Denmark claiming Norway was a man, from experience. "Should we believe him?"
"Yes," says Scotland, with an expression that does not invite further inquiry.
England, with a similar expression, eliminates Denmark himself and Germany's brother. Germany he claims to have seen in an undershirt - "not definative, but damn close, I should think." Sweden, they vaugely remember wearing a beard, back in the eighteenth century, and after a brief discussion conclude he would have come out with Finland, if ever. Wales is the only one who even remembers the names of all the ex-Yugoslavs, so they write them off. No use betting on someone who wouldn't show up for EU meetings
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Re: All Together Now [15b/18]
anonymous
March 2 2011, 16:26:56 UTC
Ohoho, so Finland says Prussia is and England says s/he isn't. Interesting. So either Finland's lying or England's covering for Prussia. Interesting indeed. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Have to admit I'm biased though, I love Fem!Prussia and the idea of her masquerading as a man is really intriguing.
Re: All Together Now [15b/18]
anonymous
March 2 2011, 20:22:03 UTC
The British siblings are among my favorite fanon. NGL, their presence here earned this fic another few stars in my book. Particularly that they're getting along, for once ♥
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They stare at each other for a bit. Sweden's hands are stuck in his pockets, and he has the vaugely terrified look he always gets when someone's health is involved. It's really more terrifying than terrified, but Estonia knows him well. "How is he?" Sweden says.
"Hungover." Estonia frowns. "Weren't you going to fix the woodshed?"
"I did." He half-shrugs, and gestures in that general direction with his elbow.
Estonia nods, and waves him inside. He might as well stay in; Sweden's better at dealing with Finland's temper, but he thinks all three of them should be around, if they're going to bring up damage control. His phone chirps, and he detours to the kitchen. The message is, he realizes with some surprise, from England. So fast? I would gloat but I'm in no position to, it starts. Is it true about Russia, or was Poland having us on? There follows a recipe for his hangover cure.
Estonia has to pull up a dictionary to work out widdershins, and the resulting concoction ( ... )
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parts 10-13: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=40843161#t40843161
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NO WONDER FRANCE LIKED HER AND SPAIN SO MUCH!
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Oh my god, I'll admit I never though I'd see this update again! But I'm so glad it did.
I love your Finland. So, so much. He's so cool. ♥ He's one of my favorite characters, and I really liked how you wrote him here.
I have a question, though - I mean, it's your fic, and it's lovely, but - is Poland going to show up again? He's - well, she, in this case - is my favorite, which is why I made that request in the first place. Looks like next part is going to be about Prussia, who I'll admit I don't like, but I guess we'll see!
Besides that, isn't it kinda funny that most of the girls/the ones with female bodies are in Central or Eastern Europe, had some link with Russia? I wonder what that means...
Thank you so much for still writing this. I hope the next part won't take this long again, ahah. ;) ;)
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Honestly, that's just coincidence - I picked them based on characterization, and threw in a few OCs based on who I had headcanon for.
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Ahah, well, Spain and South Italy break the pattern, but besides that... or maybe these would just be the ones Finland and Poland would know more about, being closer geographically? Beside China being, well, China, I mean.
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"Give that back," England snaps, and makes a grab for his laptop.
Scotland casually moves it to his left hand and holds it away from his brother, who slips from the sofa and falls to the carpet with a horribly undignified thump. "United Kingdom," Scotland says placidly. "If ye don't want that I should read your mail, ye should nae send it from a government-issue laptop."
"It's still my mail, you horrid little wanker!" England scrambles to his feet, and tries to punch Scotland. Scotland can't quite hit back without dropping the laptop; he settles for holding onto England's wrist, brusingly tight. England tries to knee him instead, but overbalances. The resulting crash sends both of them to the floor in a heap of entangled limbs ( ... )
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They eliminate Greece - sideburns - and the Czech Republic - moustache. Ireland is able to tick off Netherlands and North Italy on the basis of having slept with them, and remembers Denmark claiming Norway was a man, from experience. "Should we believe him?"
"Yes," says Scotland, with an expression that does not invite further inquiry.
England, with a similar expression, eliminates Denmark himself and Germany's brother. Germany he claims to have seen in an undershirt - "not definative, but damn close, I should think." Sweden, they vaugely remember wearing a beard, back in the eighteenth century, and after a brief discussion conclude he would have come out with Finland, if ever. Wales is the only one who even remembers the names of all the ex-Yugoslavs, so they write them off. No use betting on someone who wouldn't show up for EU meetings ( ... )
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Have to admit I'm biased though, I love Fem!Prussia and the idea of her masquerading as a man is really intriguing.
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