At Least We're in This Together (5b/?)
anonymous
January 3 2011, 04:55:39 UTC
The kid just continued whimpering, great droplets of tears rolling down chubby cheeks, such a picture of pathetic helplessness that Arthur simply could not bully the child anymore.
“There, there.” He muttered awkwardly, patting the small thing on the head. The copper-headed child stopped crying, but it continued to sniffle and tremble, looking all the world like a rabbit within the grips of a wolf, just anticipating being ripped to shreds.
“...Lilli! Oh, yes, I’ve been trying to catch for hours … no, lo siento, Roderica didn’t tell me you had school …” The man seemed completely wrapped up in his conversation, not even reacting when the pigtailed girl in his arms began screaming in his ear, grabbing handfuls of his hair and smacking him about the head.
Arthur was glad that he was holding the child he was. And he was starting to regret offering to be a Good Samaritan. Dammit, he was going to miss his program, wasn’t he
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Re: At Least We're in This Together (5c/?)
anonymous
January 3 2011, 19:14:05 UTC
Oh, my God, the PruHun in the first chapter is too delicious and lovely and heartrending all at the same time to not be fulfilled! Allow me to say that I am loving every second of this fill. J-j-just Gilbert and Francis (and Jeanne, so much Jeanne TTATT) and Antonio...so much love. And little!Mattie is SO ADORABLE I DON'T EVEN KNOW!
As for pairings...I ship FrUK usually, but the Spain/UK in these chapters is too tempting to pass up, and I want Mattie to be happy so much...I would love Spain/UK and France/US, so Mattie gets his little-boy-crush as a mama =D
Re: At Least We're in This Together (5c/?)
anonymous
January 4 2011, 00:16:46 UTC
Well, I'd like to say that I'm enjoying this fill as well~ Arthur being less grumpy when telling the story was awfully cute, and I'm really curious for when the BTT meet.
Pairings-wise, I don't normally like Spain/UK, but the set-up in this chapter was quite nice, and if they just end up friends that would be awesome. Some France/US, though they haven't met yet, also sounds nice.
Re: At Least We're in This Together (5c/?)
anonymous
January 4 2011, 03:09:51 UTC
The characterization for everyone is great. I love your Belarus. She's so badass...Mattie is such a cool 5yr old.I've never seen a 5-yr old wanting to be read Shakespeare. It's hard to get them to even sit down for a book. But maybe that's part of Arthur's magic Idk what else to say, besides I LOVE you.
My vote is for Spain/UK, France/US... Daddy took lil Mattie's first love :o. Thanks for the PruHun too.
As much as I love France/UK, I would love to see Spain/UK because its so hard to find fills that aren't hatesex or outright rape of this pairing, so my vote is for Spain/UK. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease oh god
Re: At Least We're in This Together (5c/?)
anonymous
January 4 2011, 04:44:24 UTC
This story is moving along extremely well. :) I love, love your characterization of Arthur the most. ^^ As for pairings, PruHun and SpainUK are a definite yes. Though, I would be most interested in FranceUS. From the way you've set up the story so far, I'd love to see the reaction between Matthew, Alfred and Francis, particularly Matthew's reaction to seeing Alfred as another father figure rather than his "first love".
lol, sorry if this doesn't really make sense. My thoughts are just all over the place today. ^^;
The kid just continued whimpering, great droplets of tears rolling down chubby cheeks, such a picture of pathetic helplessness that Arthur simply could not bully the child anymore.
“There, there.” He muttered awkwardly, patting the small thing on the head. The copper-headed child stopped crying, but it continued to sniffle and tremble, looking all the world like a rabbit within the grips of a wolf, just anticipating being ripped to shreds.
“...Lilli! Oh, yes, I’ve been trying to catch for hours … no, lo siento, Roderica didn’t tell me you had school …” The man seemed completely wrapped up in his conversation, not even reacting when the pigtailed girl in his arms began screaming in his ear, grabbing handfuls of his hair and smacking him about the head.
Arthur was glad that he was holding the child he was. And he was starting to regret offering to be a Good Samaritan. Dammit, he was going to miss his program, wasn’t he ( ... )
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as for pairings, my vote goes to France/US and Spain/UK *3*
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As for pairings...I ship FrUK usually, but the Spain/UK in these chapters is too tempting to pass up, and I want Mattie to be happy so much...I would love Spain/UK and France/US, so Mattie gets his little-boy-crush as a mama =D
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Pairings-wise, I don't normally like Spain/UK, but the set-up in this chapter was quite nice, and if they just end up friends that would be awesome. Some France/US, though they haven't met yet, also sounds nice.
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My vote is for Spain/UK, France/US... Daddy took lil Mattie's first love :o. Thanks for the PruHun too.
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lol, sorry if this doesn't really make sense. My thoughts are just all over the place today. ^^;
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The way you wrote them was just so beautiful... ;_;
All the story IS beautiful!!!
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Seriously, I'm tearing up. :'D
Alfred as a first grade teacher and Arthur as a librarian made my week. ♥
And Mathieu
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