Forced prostitution - Baltics (AU)
anonymous
December 26 2010, 17:48:10 UTC
I want a story where Russia and Belarus are evil and poor step parents of the Baltic brothers and they are forcing their sons to sell themselves for money.
Bonus 1: All three of them have bad and good experiences in clients Bonus 2: One of the clients falls in love with one of the boys and tries to save him. (I'd love it if that one of the boys was Estonia, simply because of bonus 3 and also because I think he needs more love.) Bonus 3: The other two Baltics get jealous that there's someone who cares about their brother and do everything to sabotage the rescue mission. (in other words I'd like some bitter and jealous Lithuania and Latvia please)
Linger On [1a/?)
anonymous
January 1 2011, 11:06:57 UTC
Anon couldn't resist. ;;;; This is probably part 1 of 2, setting up everything before the rest of the drama and angst crawls in and the climax. I really hope you enjoy, OP! I'll be back in a day or two hopefully with more, as long as nothing happens <3 The Netherlands has a short appearance as Denmark's buddy. Used the (not very Dutch but Dutch enough) name Lars.
the title has nothing much to do with the story, I was just listening to this song while writing it on repeat, and it appears in the song. xD;; 'Maylsh' is used for a nickname in this for Latvia, and it's just a cutesy Russian nickname.
Re: Linger On [1b/?)
anonymous
January 1 2011, 11:08:16 UTC
“Yeah. Y'can just call me Sadiq, kid.” Eduard shakes his head in response, letting Toris and Raivis stay at the door. Sadiq has said this and offered his name so many times before, but they never bite, unless he's grabbing their hair and yanking their heads back and making them writhe in intensity.
He likes getting close to Sadiq. The man keeps a green hoodie on always, over his head, darkening his face, but he's younger and more handsome than most of the scum in the city. He's just an absolute pervert, and he pulls out a drawer and grabs a set of keys
( ... )
Linger On [1c/?)
anonymous
January 1 2011, 11:09:13 UTC
Eduard heads to the bar area. He itches to order a drink but doesn't, eyes scanning around the other patrons. He catches on to a man, tall and overgrown from the crowd similar to himself, and he groans because he knows him and knows what he's like
( ... )
Linger On [1d/?)
anonymous
January 1 2011, 11:10:28 UTC
Even though the Estonian was offered drinks, he took just one, even if he could probably have bested the other man at the game of drink and still been able to stand. His alcoholic genes passed down from his deceased real parents-head on collision, vodka bottle between the two of them--have always gave him security in holding his alcohol
( ... )
I really do enjoy this and am very excited to see what happens next :) I especially love it how you've made Eduard into someone who likes to take the initiative and not just sit back and wait until customers just take what they want. Yeah, I like that a lot. I hope everything goes as you've planned and you'll be able to update soon. But I understand if something more important in your life happens :). I'll be eagerly waiting no matter how long it takes you. And thank you for adding the link to the song. I listened it and loved it. It has been a while since I last listened to Lykke Li. So yeah, thank you:)
Linger On [2a/?)
anonymous
January 3 2011, 02:55:34 UTC
authoranon apologizes. I am bad at keeping parts straight. I once wrote a oneshot and it currently has over fifteen chapters ahah OTL.... but really. this won't take forever, I promise! For some reason this chapter ended up including more 'slices of life' then I meant to. It just felt weird to entirely have it focused on a romance, and I wanted to give more time to the other bros too. Thank you guys for your awesome words so far and I'm glad you're liking it, OP <3 note; I switched to '_ _ _' to denote skips instead of the plus signs. my open office was really hating the plus signs, it got annoying._ _ _
( ... )
Linger On [2b/?)
anonymous
January 3 2011, 02:56:05 UTC
Finding it while sifting through the piles of their discarded clothes, he slowly dresses himself before picking up the leather wallet. Opening it, he flips through-it's loaded with cash, Nikolaj is like a traveler without a clue who got too happy at being able to go somewhere new. It's like a dream to Eduard as he's busy making up excuses in his mind as to why theft is okay.
It isn't okay.
Nothing in his life really has been okay. It's something that he's living with and has accepted, though. It wasn't okay for his real parents to die or for him to have his virginity sold off for 50 dollars American when he was 13 while his 'new dad' watched.
His full name appears to be Nikolaj Mathias Anderson. 25 years old, born in July, blue eyes, blonde hair. 177 centimeters, 75 kilograms, Nikolaj's life condensed.
Eduard shoves the whole wallet into his pocket and starts to pull on his sweater and jacket. Mister Anderson never stirs
( ... )
Linger On [2c/?)
anonymous
January 3 2011, 02:56:35 UTC
Raivis wishes that his brothers wouldn't fawn over him so much. Eduard is always waiting for him at school, outside each classroom, not wanting anyone else to lay their eyes on his little sibling. They go to a rather crummy school, and Eduard easily takes top marks in every test and exam while Raivis struggles a little. Nobody looks at them any differently for their tattered clothing or normally unwashed hair
( ... )
Aaaw ... that simple question 'Are we bad people?' made my heart ache. But the pain was soothed by the sweetness and somewhat awkwardness(in the beginning) between Nikolaj and Eduard. And the mention of how Alfred would film the three brothers together set my imagination flying, I have now some fantastic pictures in my head. Thanks for that *evil grin* Hell, wait for me, I'll be there soon enough !
I'm kind of teetering on the edge here of really to include hardcore smut or not xD; This story is already two steps from diving in and having smut all over the walls, and I'm not sure really if that's the direction I want to go.. but with the premise there will be some, that's unavoidable xD; Who doesn't love a Baltic threesome though, omgosh ♥
<33!
also a small note but er, I just realized I fucked up on Nikolaj's intended last name. It should be Andersen, after, well, Hans Christian, but my mind was stuck between that and Sørenson so my mind seems to have.. accidentally melded the two. :c My apologies!
Bonus 1: All three of them have bad and good experiences in clients
Bonus 2: One of the clients falls in love with one of the boys and tries to save him. (I'd love it if that one of the boys was Estonia, simply because of bonus 3 and also because I think he needs more love.)
Bonus 3: The other two Baltics get jealous that there's someone who cares about their brother and do everything to sabotage the rescue mission. (in other words I'd like some bitter and jealous Lithuania and Latvia please)
Reply
I really hope you enjoy, OP! I'll be back in a day or two hopefully with more, as long as nothing happens <3
The Netherlands has a short appearance as Denmark's buddy. Used the (not very Dutch but Dutch enough) name Lars.
the title has nothing much to do with the story, I was just listening to this song while writing it on repeat, and it appears in the song. xD;;
'Maylsh' is used for a nickname in this for Latvia, and it's just a cutesy Russian nickname.
+ + +There was screaming and yelling ( ... )
Reply
He likes getting close to Sadiq. The man keeps a green hoodie on always, over his head, darkening his face, but he's younger and more handsome than most of the scum in the city. He's just an absolute pervert, and he pulls out a drawer and grabs a set of keys ( ... )
Reply
Eduard heads to the bar area. He itches to order a drink but doesn't, eyes scanning around the other patrons. He catches on to a man, tall and overgrown from the crowd similar to himself, and he groans because he knows him and knows what he's like ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Reply
I especially love it how you've made Eduard into someone who likes to take the initiative and not just sit back and wait until customers just take what they want. Yeah, I like that a lot.
I hope everything goes as you've planned and you'll be able to update soon. But I understand if something more important in your life happens :). I'll be eagerly waiting no matter how long it takes you.
And thank you for adding the link to the song. I listened it and loved it. It has been a while since I last listened to Lykke Li. So yeah, thank you:)
Reply
Reply
(And I love your Estonia)
Reply
Reply
For some reason this chapter ended up including more 'slices of life' then I meant to. It just felt weird to entirely have it focused on a romance, and I wanted to give more time to the other bros too.
Thank you guys for your awesome words so far and I'm glad you're liking it, OP <3
note; I switched to '_ _ _' to denote skips instead of the plus signs. my open office was really hating the plus signs, it got annoying._ _ _ ( ... )
Reply
It isn't okay.
Nothing in his life really has been okay. It's something that he's living with and has accepted, though. It wasn't okay for his real parents to die or for him to have his virginity sold off for 50 dollars American when he was 13 while his 'new dad' watched.
His full name appears to be Nikolaj Mathias Anderson. 25 years old, born in July, blue eyes, blonde hair. 177 centimeters, 75 kilograms, Nikolaj's life condensed.
Eduard shoves the whole wallet into his pocket and starts to pull on his sweater and jacket. Mister Anderson never stirs ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Reply
Hell, wait for me, I'll be there soon enough !
<3 you author!anon ! :3
Reply
I'm kind of teetering on the edge here of really to include hardcore smut or not xD; This story is already two steps from diving in and having smut all over the walls, and I'm not sure really if that's the direction I want to go.. but with the premise there will be some, that's unavoidable xD;
Who doesn't love a Baltic threesome though, omgosh ♥
<33!
also a small note but er, I just realized I fucked up on Nikolaj's intended last name. It should be Andersen, after, well, Hans Christian, but my mind was stuck between that and Sørenson so my mind seems to have.. accidentally melded the two. :c My apologies!
Reply
Leave a comment