France - negative repercussions of being 'the slut'
anonymous
October 23 2010, 17:23:13 UTC
Exactly what it says on the tin. France has gotten the reputation for being willing to put-out for just about anyone, so I would like to see something, at least a little angsty, about France feeling the negative repercussions of being the world's slut.
Such as, but not limited to: name-calling, either to his face or behind his back, annoying booty-calls at inopportune times, sexual harassment, scorn from more conservative nations, nations only spending time with him with a motive, no one taking him seriously, ect.
Bonus 1: France actually suffers from an addiction to sex and wants to stop, but can't Bonus 2: Even the other Bad Friends treat him as a friend-with-benefits Bonus 3: He used to enjoy the attention, but grows to loath it
I'm fine with any pairings, should anon wish to include one. :3
Everybody Loves Me [1/?]
anonymous
October 23 2010, 22:11:49 UTC
This is author!anon's first attempt at Hetalia fic. My apology in advance for any fail! Updates may be slow since I have midterms. OTL ;;The bed is empty, again
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Everybody Loves Me [2/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 05:45:46 UTC
Oh wow. I got sudden inspiration and I did not expect to write this much. Damn character limits! OTL ;; I should have a count on how many parts this is soon! <3The meeting room was filled with the chatter of each country. Conversation ranged from the current condition of the Swiss economy to how Romano needed to get laid, big time. The Italian brother scolded the pompous Prussian for his statement, yelling numerous inappropriate phrases before throwing his hands up in frustration. Spain laughed, assured Gilbert that him and his lover had a perfectly fine sex life then kissed the blushing South Italy on the cheek. Of course, Francis Bonnefoy could have argued that their sex life was far from satisfying since he had seen Romano in his bed, but he kept his mouth shut. And no, the self proclaimed romanticist thought, getting laid did not help his attitude
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Everybody Loves Me [3/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 05:50:51 UTC
A commanding voice emerged, cutting conversation short and leaving the room silent. Eyes opened to see the notoriously serious Germany gathering the attention of the room. France never slept with him. At first, he thought that it was normal; Ludwig was a man who kept to himself, similar to many other nations. But when Hong Kong started to lay his hands upon him, when Iceland broke his silence and entered his home, when all of those other nations arched their backs for France and Germany didn't, he became curious. He did attempt to seduce him once only for it to fail. Germany was caught up in some piece of nonsense document from the last European Union meeting and wasn't paying too much attention. Annoyed, France was about ready to scream, “Sleep with me, connard!” but Feliciano managed to wiggle his way into their conversation and end Francis Bonnefoy's 247th seduction
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Everybody Loves Me [4/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 05:52:53 UTC
America had an arm protectively around his lover and the European briefly wondered how the two of them could ignore the obvious flaws in their relationship. Maybe it would have been better if they panted each other's names while France was bobbing his head between their thighs, but they didn't. If that had happened, he could at least try to believe that they did indeed love each other. They didn't moan his name either but that was a different story altogether. You sleep with whoever but you cry out for the one you love. What a shame; they actually did look cute together
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Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 05:54:20 UTC
If the Spaniard wasn't gripping his hair so tightly-to a point where his roots would probably be damaged, France inwardly sighed-then he would have turned around to look. No, that was a lie. He didn't want to look. He didn't want to have to face someone with pre-cum smeared around his mouth and remorse in his eyes. Most importantly, he didn't want someone else to ask for a blow job too. But Russia says nothing. With that eerie smile donning his face, he merely grabs his pen and sits up straight again. Once he stops feeling the pair of eyes burning their gaze onto his back, the Frenchman gives a sigh of relief. The Prussian doesn't care though; he's impatient. A swift kick to France's stomach reminds him that his friends are far from willing to wait. He winces, although Francis was sure Gilbert did not mean to kick him that hard. He probably meant to kick him harder. Pulling away from Spain, he lets his hands do the rest of the work. If they both climax at the same time then France will not have to worry about one of them getting
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Re: Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 06:07:25 UTC
Oh gosh authornon, this is such a different portrayal of France. My heart truly aches for him. I do hope you will continue this fill. I'm excited to see the next few parts.
(Is it wrong that I'm hopping that Canada will play a part? And that Russia won't take advantage of France.)
Re: Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 07:47:24 UTC
Very very interesting take on another angle. I am thinking that part about Prussia and Spain is actually the most upsetting for France, they are his friends after all. But it is kind of messed up, huh?
Would it be possible that this ends with a France/Germany? Germany seems like the right guy to break France out of this vicious cycle, somehow.
I shouldn't be as happy as I am because I'm so sad for France, but asldkfjas;lj
God, this is everything I asked for and more. My heart broke at,
"And, damn it, no one was looking at them. No one was scolding them. No one was telling France that he didn't have to do it and that he could resist his urges."
Just his panic at those thoughts. :( Even though I requested it, I kind of want to kick Prussia and Spain right now. And I have a feeling that Russia is only going to make matters worse.
Re: Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 15:28:51 UTC
Very interesting, I like it so far. Poor France though, it's really sad to see him like this. I hope that Canada will get a part in this, too (since he was mentioned already). I'm curious to see what's going to happen next (and I definitely hope there will be a happy ending for France). Good work, anon! <3
Re: Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 24 2010, 18:57:48 UTC
ouch, this hurts so bad, poor France! It's ten times worse when it's revealed as a physical illness and he can't control it, not that the namecalling wasn't bad enough. Fascinating portrayal of the BTT, for once not as caring and supportive as they're usually portrayed, but fully IC with Antonio's cluelessness about everything (not relaising there's something wrong with France) and Prussia's selfishness.
I hope Russia plays a part, a good part for once instead of the rapetruck. He is innocent and lonely enough to be fascinated but not sure what to do with this. I also hope, as another reviewer said, that this ends France/Germany, because it seems perfect for it <3
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Re: Everybody Loves Me [5/?]
anonymous
October 25 2010, 01:16:53 UTC
This didnt come off as a physical illness to me anon. It was more a mental one. France is so lonely for affection and for a real partner, so depressed over how hypocritical the world is and how he is called loose so much over something he cant control because his illness (up there)...so sad.
Such as, but not limited to: name-calling, either to his face or behind his back, annoying booty-calls at inopportune times, sexual harassment, scorn from more conservative nations, nations only spending time with him with a motive, no one taking him seriously, ect.
Bonus 1: France actually suffers from an addiction to sex and wants to stop, but can't
Bonus 2: Even the other Bad Friends treat him as a friend-with-benefits
Bonus 3: He used to enjoy the attention, but grows to loath it
I'm fine with any pairings, should anon wish to include one. :3
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Seconded.
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Great start so far, this looks really promising! <3
Don't forget to link it on the fills list. :3
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(Is it wrong that I'm hopping that Canada will play a part? And that Russia won't take advantage of France.)
-wibbles-
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Would it be possible that this ends with a France/Germany? Germany seems like the right guy to break France out of this vicious cycle, somehow.
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God, this is everything I asked for and more. My heart broke at,
"And, damn it, no one was looking at them. No one was scolding them. No one was telling France that he didn't have to do it and that he could resist his urges."
Just his panic at those thoughts. :( Even though I requested it, I kind of want to kick Prussia and Spain right now. And I have a feeling that Russia is only going to make matters worse.
Good job, anon, I can't wait for more.
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I hope Russia plays a part, a good part for once instead of the rapetruck. He is innocent and lonely enough to be fascinated but not sure what to do with this.
I also hope, as another reviewer said, that this ends France/Germany, because it seems perfect for it <3 ( ... )
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