Your Sins Into Me [Prologue ]
anonymous
August 30 2010, 03:34:52 UTC
This was the only way I could write this, orz orz. Sorry that this will only make what will happen later more painful, dear OP ; ; Also, sorry it took me so long to get this up
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Re: Your Sins Into Me [Prologue END]
anonymous
August 31 2010, 13:02:46 UTC
I think you meant Prologue?
Oh fuck, that warming about laying was so ominous. But Arthur was a faery right? And how were faeries supposed to...well fuck I think I'll find out later, y/y? I love you for putting child!Alfred into this; it's believable that Arthur first saw him as a child and then the child grew up. Though it's, I dunno, rather unnerving to see how Alfred changed through years, which I think Arthur would eventually find out, in a painful way...;_;
Go ahead dear writer!anon! I'll be camping here and ready to bawl.
First off, OP would like to apologize profusely for missing the first update, I was away on a laptop-less trip orz;;;;
B-but I hope it isn't too late to shower authornon with total adoration and hugs? 'Cause I absolutely love with this fill with a passion of a thousand burning suns you don't even know. See, your writing has this way of flowing naturally that makes it utterly addictive and all kinds of lovely, and, and, and your characterization! ahskaehifrinjjk W-why made of so much win, authoranon? I love you to smithereens for including Alfred as a child before delving into the actual request. It's more heartbreaking that way. Arthur's devotion to the human child is so endearing and sweet, I can imagine him napping on a flower bed in grown-up Alfred's garden ;_;
And holy shit that last sentence right there, with the snap of rubber gloves. *shudders* As much as I knew where it was going, it nonetheless gave me chills. I eagerly await for more.I-I can't possibly love you enough for your
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Your Sins Into Me [2/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 21:28:40 UTC
Arthur had proudly given them the middle finger, a little something he’d learned from his human years prior. Inwardly though, he felt his heart churn in pain. He knew his brothers spoke the truth. He knew Alfred would never look at him the way Arthur looked at Alfred. Alfred would never hold him, would never hold Arthur’s hand like he held that girl’s
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Your Sins Into Me [3/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 21:34:08 UTC
“-pathetic?” Arthur rolled his eyes. “You’ve told me this. Are you a parrot? Have you so little brains that you cannot say anything else?” He snorted, steeling his voice to make his words as hurtful as possible. His smile was cruel, lips curved in derision. “If you find me so pathetic and displeasing I suggest you go to my brothers. I am sure something can be done to break our union. Nothing has obviously come out of it
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Your Sins Into Me [4/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 21:53:15 UTC
“Yes, I do!” Arthur huffed, hands clenched tightly. “He is the one I want. And I never asked to be tied to you. That was my brothers’ doing. I never loved you and I never will
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Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 21:55:44 UTC
Yanking off his gloves, this time Alfred touched Arthur with his bare hands.
Arthur chocked when he was turned on his stomach. The hands prodded at his skin, leaving behind angry purple-green bruises, sores that would last for days. Arthur’s breath hitched when lean fingers ran up the length of his body, spiking higher and higher, dangerously close to the clasp that held his robe together…
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…eh. I am much too embarrassed to post the rest of this chapter. Cough. I’ve never written this kink before, hell, never even considered it, so please allow me some time to mentally prepare myself. I will post the rest later tonight, dear anons. Also, thanks so much for your comments; I’m wary about replying to them as I do not wish to take up valuable space. But please know that I appreciate every single one of them! :D
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 22:18:20 UTC
This story makes me feel like I'm watching a car crash in a strange beautiful way. My heart bleeds for Arthur and I think I spent most of this section just really wanting him to go off with Francis if only to spare him. I've got my fingers crossed for a happy ending.
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 22:51:38 UTC
When I saw that this had updated, I got this cold feeling in my gut. Though maybe that was just the water I was drinking.
Either way! This story is disturbing in the best way possible. Even though I have a feeling it's only going to get worse before it gets please anon? better. I'm pretty resiliant when it comes to dark and angsty stuff, but this...I'm not sure that I'll be able to finish this one. D:
Re: Your Sins Into Me [5/?]
anonymous
September 5 2010, 22:54:39 UTC
Oh my god, I love this story more than words. I love all of the build up at the beginning, the way Arthur truly loves Alfred, oh god, it's just going to get even more painful. I am so glad like you don't even know that you're filling this, anon. And don't worry, I'm sure you'll do a wonderful job writing the kink! :D
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Oh fuck, that warming about laying was so ominous. But Arthur was a faery right? And how were faeries supposed to...well fuck I think I'll find out later, y/y? I love you for putting child!Alfred into this; it's believable that Arthur first saw him as a child and then the child grew up. Though it's, I dunno, rather unnerving to see how Alfred changed through years, which I think Arthur would eventually find out, in a painful way...;_;
Go ahead dear writer!anon! I'll be camping here and ready to bawl.
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Tis' why I get for typing this up so late :D
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First off, OP would like to apologize profusely for missing the first update, I was away on a laptop-less trip orz;;;;
B-but I hope it isn't too late to shower authornon with total adoration and hugs? 'Cause I absolutely love with this fill with a passion of a thousand burning suns you don't even know. See, your writing has this way of flowing naturally that makes it utterly addictive and all kinds of lovely, and, and, and your characterization! ahskaehifrinjjk W-why made of so much win, authoranon? I love you to smithereens for including Alfred as a child before delving into the actual request. It's more heartbreaking that way. Arthur's devotion to the human child is so endearing and sweet, I can imagine him napping on a flower bed in grown-up Alfred's garden ;_;
And holy shit that last sentence right there, with the snap of rubber gloves. *shudders* As much as I knew where it was going, it nonetheless gave me chills. I eagerly await for more.I-I can't possibly love you enough for your ( ... )
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Seriously. this hits all my kinks. Hope to see the next part up soon~
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other than that, great job. <3 totally looking foward to more of this!
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Arthur chocked when he was turned on his stomach. The hands prodded at his skin, leaving behind angry purple-green bruises, sores that would last for days. Arthur’s breath hitched when lean fingers ran up the length of his body, spiking higher and higher, dangerously close to the clasp that held his robe together…
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…eh. I am much too embarrassed to post the rest of this chapter. Cough. I’ve never written this kink before, hell, never even considered it, so please allow me some time to mentally prepare myself. I will post the rest later tonight, dear anons. Also, thanks so much for your comments; I’m wary about replying to them as I do not wish to take up valuable space. But please know that I appreciate every single one of them! :D
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Though maybe that was just the water I was drinking.
Either way! This story is disturbing in the best way possible. Even though I have a feeling it's only going to get worse before it gets please anon? better. I'm pretty resiliant when it comes to dark and angsty stuff, but this...I'm not sure that I'll be able to finish this one. D:
Even so, keep up the good work, anon. d;_;b
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I eagerly await more.
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