OP loves you~! 8D
anonymous
September 23 2010, 03:50:07 UTC
Dude, you totally just made my day. This is the first time anyone's ever done a fill for me and GAH! It's just so cute! TAT Reading that just made me so happy. I love the way Romano's doing all these things while denying that the reason for them is because he misses Spain. He's even keeping track of the days..aw! I also liked Veneziano's appearance. Their interaction was great, and for some reason, I especially liked Romano going on edge because his brother was only picking at his food, and of course, Veneziano's observations about the clean house and Spanish dishes. The last sentence really builds up my anticipation. Please continue soon! I'm really looking forward to it! ^^
Oh yeah, and I'll be stalking this, but I'd recommend posting it on the fills list so more people can read it. Unless you're waiting until you're finished or something...
Re: One year, six months, and probably five days (3a/3)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 00:44:20 UTC
Romano had just harvested the tomatoes, was trying to figure out what to cook for dinner, when he heard the creak of the front gate. He looked up, about ready to yell at whoever it was now, but the words dried up when he saw Spain, standing a little unsteadily, looking too thin, smiling at him.
“Hola, Romano,” he said, a little hoarsely, before a tomato splatted against his shirt.
“Bastard,” Romano snarled, marching over. “Why the hell did you let yourself get captured?” (Please don’t be a dream again, please oh please be real…“Ah, Romano, that wasn’t very cute,” Spain pouted, apparently ignoring the question
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Re: One year, six months, and probably five days (3b/3)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 00:49:53 UTC
Romano stormed back into the kitchen, hands newly washed, gauze in one hand and a poultice in the other.
“Right, so sit still and I’ll bandage you up,” Romano started to say.
“Romano,” Spain interrupted, “Did you miss me?”
Romano stared at him for a second, before closing his eyes and letting out a slow breath. “Spain,” he said patiently, “Please be quiet. Please.” (I’m about to cry as it is)
Spain’s shoulders drooped, but he stayed quiet.
“Thank you,” Romano said stiffly. He bent over Spain’s arm, so he missed the way Spain’s eyes lit up at the little bit of politeness.
Romano carefully pulled up Spain’s sleeve, wincing at the wound. It was messy, and most definitely had to hurt. Gently, he used some of the gauze to clean the worst of the debris out of the wound before applying the poultice. He worked quietly, nose almost touching Spain’s arm.
When he started winding the gauze around Spain’s arm, everything finally hit him.
Spain’s home. He’s home, and it’s real, and he’s going to be okay. (I'm going to be okaySpain looked
( ... )
Waaa~! That was sooo good! I loved Romano's reaction to finding out Spain had been captured and all his angsting. The reunion was great! Pfft, Spain is so adorkable. Their interaction was really great. Thank you so much for this fill! ^^ I really enjoyed it~ *crunches you in a hug*
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Can't wait for the next part! :)
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Oh yeah, and I'll be stalking this, but I'd recommend posting it on the fills list so more people can read it. Unless you're waiting until you're finished or something...
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“Hola, Romano,” he said, a little hoarsely, before a tomato splatted against his shirt.
“Bastard,” Romano snarled, marching over. “Why the hell did you let yourself get captured?” (Please don’t be a dream again, please oh please be real…“Ah, Romano, that wasn’t very cute,” Spain pouted, apparently ignoring the question ( ... )
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“Right, so sit still and I’ll bandage you up,” Romano started to say.
“Romano,” Spain interrupted, “Did you miss me?”
Romano stared at him for a second, before closing his eyes and letting out a slow breath. “Spain,” he said patiently, “Please be quiet. Please.” (I’m about to cry as it is)
Spain’s shoulders drooped, but he stayed quiet.
“Thank you,” Romano said stiffly. He bent over Spain’s arm, so he missed the way Spain’s eyes lit up at the little bit of politeness.
Romano carefully pulled up Spain’s sleeve, wincing at the wound. It was messy, and most definitely had to hurt. Gently, he used some of the gauze to clean the worst of the debris out of the wound before applying the poultice. He worked quietly, nose almost touching Spain’s arm.
When he started winding the gauze around Spain’s arm, everything finally hit him.
Spain’s home. He’s home, and it’s real, and he’s going to be okay. (I'm going to be okaySpain looked ( ... )
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I lol'ed at the "allergic to stupidity" excuse, but that didn't stop me from tearing up over this. You are amazing. <3
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