Confiteor Deo Omnipoténti 2/2
anonymous
August 18 2010, 03:19:35 UTC
Feliks always wants a little pain. Not enough to break bones, though. If he wanted that, Ivan would be a better choice than himself. Perhaps that too his atonement, like the prayers on cold floors and flagellation of the monks. He can't ever enjoy it completely; there must be some punishment
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anonymous
August 18 2010, 03:48:19 UTC
BAAAAAAAW, ANON
w-why you do this to me?
Poor Poland. Poor Estonia. This was beautifully written and I feel for the characters involved - I have my own case of the catholic guilt to deal with, so I guess I can understand feliks pretty well here. But seeing it through eduard's eyes (as he isolates the contradictions involved) make me wince.
baw. now I need some fluff with these two. this pairing is too rare for how well it could work out...
Re: Confiteor Deo Omnipoténti 2/2
anonymous
August 18 2010, 09:04:19 UTC
Woah, woah, WOAH! I never even considered this pairing but this fill is amazing. Terribly sad, though. May I request a sequel, a bit less heartbreaking?
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anonymous
August 19 2010, 05:17:35 UTC
Thank you! I don't know about continuing this 'verse as it's a darker 'verse and I draw a blank when I think for more, but I was thinking of filling more of the pairing in a cute sense anyways and testing how they'd work ♥
Re: Confiteor Deo Omnipoténti 2/2
anonymous
August 18 2010, 19:40:47 UTC
Oh, my heart anon, take it.
I really love how you portrayed both of them in this. Poland with Catholic guilt is kind of my headcanon, but Estonia--oh, his denial at the end and his forced callousness.
The meme needs more of Estonia and this pairing. Thank you anon. <3
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anonymous
August 18 2010, 22:47:34 UTC
I like this very much, anon. I'm an atheist and I've been for a very long time, but there's a difference between those who simply were raised without a faith and those who fell from grace, so to speak, and you showed this perfectly - I liked how Eduard recognizes precisely the meaning of everything Feliks says and does and understands him on a, let's say 'human' level while keeping him as far as possible on a rational level - and the solution for the both of them is right there, in plain view, but both have their own prejudice and can't see it.
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w-why you do this to me?
Poor Poland. Poor Estonia. This was beautifully written and I feel for the characters involved - I have my own case of the catholic guilt to deal with, so I guess I can understand feliks pretty well here. But seeing it through eduard's eyes (as he isolates the contradictions involved) make me wince.
baw. now I need some fluff with these two. this pairing is too rare for how well it could work out...
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Also, thank you to everyone else who commented.
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I really love how you portrayed both of them in this. Poland with Catholic guilt is kind of my headcanon, but Estonia--oh, his denial at the end and his forced callousness.
The meme needs more of Estonia and this pairing. Thank you anon. <3
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Well, I hope that made sense.
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The way that was so understated just... It completely broke my heart anon. Completely. I have such a soft spot for Russia, and it... *sniff*
And the way this whole fill was put together is beautiful. I hope you write more (hopefully happier) fills
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