Estonia/Liechtenstein - Heartbeats
anonymous
September 15 2010, 08:02:20 UTC
"Hmm excuse-me, sir."
A slender voice pipped up behind Estonia, startling the man who was typing on his laptop. He turned around to see who was the distracting cause, he still had work to do to set the powerpoint for the meeting and everybody knows that nobody should start a meeting with a disappointed Germany. In front of him, with obvious shyness on her face standed Liechtenstein. Or he hoped that it was her, but he didn't recall Switzerland wearing ribbons in his hair. Though he had picture of him in dresses, thanks the internet."What can I do for you?" he asked politely, wondering about why she would ever talk to him -they only saluted each other when they met, nothing more. Not like her brother would allow it
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Re: Estonia/Liechtenstein - Heartbeats
anonymous
September 15 2010, 09:51:10 UTC
D'aww, this is cute! This isn't horrible at all :)
Just a few minor typos (Repared should be "Repaired", should be "I can't read the text messages that I receive anymore", and 'take a lot of pictures with it') but they don't detract too much, and you said English isn't your first language?
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anonymous
September 15 2010, 14:53:13 UTC
Thanks a lot, anon!
Well, I didn't know that it is written "repaired" and I'm sorry for the typos,I should have taken the time to copy/paste the text on word. And French is my first language, hence the mistake on "repaired" ("réparé" in french) :)
Re: Estonia/Liechtenstein - Heartbeats
anonymous
September 16 2010, 01:58:13 UTC
Don't run, that was adorable! I squeed when I saw the pairing and squeed even more reading the fic! If you hadn't mentioned it, then I wouldn't have even known that English wasn't your native language.
A slender voice pipped up behind Estonia, startling the man who was typing on his laptop. He turned around to see who was the distracting cause, he still had work to do to set the powerpoint for the meeting and everybody knows that nobody should start a meeting with a disappointed Germany.
In front of him, with obvious shyness on her face standed Liechtenstein.
Or he hoped that it was her, but he didn't recall Switzerland wearing ribbons in his hair. Though he had picture of him in dresses, thanks the internet."What can I do for you?" he asked politely, wondering about why she would ever talk to him -they only saluted each other when they met, nothing more. Not like her brother would allow it ( ... )
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Just a few minor typos (Repared should be "Repaired", should be "I can't read the text messages that I receive anymore", and 'take a lot of pictures with it') but they don't detract too much, and you said English isn't your first language?
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Well, I didn't know that it is written "repaired" and I'm sorry for the typos,I should have taken the time to copy/paste the text on word.
And French is my first language, hence the mistake on "repaired" ("réparé" in french) :)
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