[Untitled] Prologue (1/4)
anonymous
September 5 2010, 10:46:39 UTC
Forgive slow posting on this one, as both authors have exceedingly busy lives, but have this drafted up (to some extent) already, so do not fear! That being said, enjoy the prologue to our fic (Codename: "Hanky Spanky"). Trust us. The porn will come. BD____
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[Untitled] Prologue (4/4)
anonymous
September 5 2010, 11:00:53 UTC
Like a plug being pulled, Romano felt the last of his fury drain away, dispersing in the breath that hissed free of clenched teeth. His head flopped forwards, his forehead landing in the safety of his palm. “…Spain’s this amazing, considerate lover, and I can’t even talk to him about sex,” he sighed. “And you know what the worst part is? He’d do it. If I told him the kinds of things that I wanted from him, he’d do it in a heartbeat. He wouldn’t make fun of me, or get impatient. I know that. He’d do it with that stupid, single-minded idiocy of his. Fucking moron.”
Italy remained silent for a long time, carefully mulling over his brother’s words as best as he could with a wine-addled mind. Eventually, figuring that they were both too drunk and too close to bother beating around that dratted proverbial bush, Italy asked the most pressing question at the forefront of his mind.
“What kinds of things do you want from him
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anonymous
September 5 2010, 12:57:11 UTC
Pfft, I love this. I had this crazy grin all through reading it because really, Feli is so adorable and shameless about everything XD Will be stalking this thread like no joke!
Let me shower you with non-tsundere love, you guys! <3
anonymous
September 5 2010, 14:36:31 UTC
Wait, what the hell? How on earth did two people write this together and get such a nice, coherent style? ... Badass.
Your writing is seriously good here, guys. (Or whichever one of you finally wrote this up, I guess?) The humor is woven beautifully into the narration and Romano's drunken thoughts, and the way it flows perfectly makes it funny as hell. I mean, I read some of those hilarious descriptions, and the funny was just sneaky; it just ambushed me and I'd have to stop mid-sentence to laugh, then to go back and reread.
The descriptions of how Romano thinks about emotions are just hilarious, but they're also pretty accurate, I'd say. I actually got up and read a couple of these to my very confused brother, including this one: “Alright, alright, fine. Jesus Christ,” Romano broke in before the first, fat tears could escape his brother’s eyes, swallowing the awkward lump in his throat that he was fairly sure was emotion, and not vomit. For some reason, that just slayed me. And this is still funny, but the description
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Re: [Untitled] Prologue (4/4)
anonymous
September 5 2010, 16:40:21 UTC
this prompt has my favorite pairing and all of my favorite kinks and I love thoughtful brother Feli... I can feel this will be one of my favorite kinky fics ever.
May I just say that I absolutely adore you? Yes? Yes. Kaythanks.
"Romano played that reel of images for a few painful moments, and then replaced it with a vision of France getting hit by a train when his stomach turned over."
Oh, Lovi. <3
ReCaptcha: denial preway. I think we already got past the denial bit, captcha.
OP here!!!
anonymous
September 10 2010, 04:49:05 UTC
Whhaaaat iiiisss thiiiiss?! =>_I-I feel so terrible for taking so long to respond to this, but lately college has had a monopoly on my time. I was scrolling through the fills tonight for the first time in a week, and as I came across this one I was like, "Wow. This has everything!" and was wondering how something matched my interests so perfectly before I realized I had made the request
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anonymous
September 10 2010, 12:14:33 UTC
Thank you so much for making this request, OP, 'cause otherwise I never would have gotten to read this awesomeness! *dances around like a happy Spaniad idiot :D*
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Like a plug being pulled, Romano felt the last of his fury drain away, dispersing in the breath that hissed free of clenched teeth. His head flopped forwards, his forehead landing in the safety of his palm. “…Spain’s this amazing, considerate lover, and I can’t even talk to him about sex,” he sighed. “And you know what the worst part is? He’d do it. If I told him the kinds of things that I wanted from him, he’d do it in a heartbeat. He wouldn’t make fun of me, or get impatient. I know that. He’d do it with that stupid, single-minded idiocy of his. Fucking moron.”
Italy remained silent for a long time, carefully mulling over his brother’s words as best as he could with a wine-addled mind. Eventually, figuring that they were both too drunk and too close to bother beating around that dratted proverbial bush, Italy asked the most pressing question at the forefront of his mind.
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Please please continue!
I totally laughed at the random [o3o] popping out of nowhere though
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Your writing is seriously good here, guys. (Or whichever one of you finally wrote this up, I guess?) The humor is woven beautifully into the narration and Romano's drunken thoughts, and the way it flows perfectly makes it funny as hell. I mean, I read some of those hilarious descriptions, and the funny was just sneaky; it just ambushed me and I'd have to stop mid-sentence to laugh, then to go back and reread.
The descriptions of how Romano thinks about emotions are just hilarious, but they're also pretty accurate, I'd say. I actually got up and read a couple of these to my very confused brother, including this one: “Alright, alright, fine. Jesus Christ,” Romano broke in before the first, fat tears could escape his brother’s eyes, swallowing the awkward lump in his throat that he was fairly sure was emotion, and not vomit. For some reason, that just slayed me. And this is still funny, but the description ( ... )
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I don't know about you, Romano, but *I* want Antonio to do those things to you.
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"Romano played that reel of images for a few painful moments, and then replaced it with a vision of France getting hit by a train when his stomach turned over."
Oh, Lovi. <3
ReCaptcha: denial preway. I think we already got past the denial bit, captcha.
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