The Fair Belle [pt 3/??]
anonymous
July 24 2010, 03:34:04 UTC
Alfred tries to keep the embarrassing whiny noises from tumbling out of his mouth, but the way Frances is stroking and pumping away, her fingers squeezing a tight loop around his erection, it’s so much better than his own hand, and he’s afraid he’s going to come right now. At last, Frances lets go, that gorgeous smile still lingering on her cherry red lips, and he doesn’t get to finish breathing a sigh of relief before she goes down on him in a creak of whalebone and rustle of petticoats. She plies her tongue against his straining cock, lapping up the precum dripping down the underside, and when she hums in enjoyment of this task, Alfred gasps and curses again as he yanks again at the piece of cloth keeping his arms trussed up. He can’t even get out the words to beg for more, but he doesn’t need to, because Frances senses he is close, and she obliges him by wrapping her lips around the head of his cock and sucking as she takes more and more of him into her mouth. She moves her head back a little for every time she inches forward,
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The Fair Belle [pt 8b/??]
anonymous
September 13 2010, 01:03:32 UTC
“Oh, it’s you!” Alfred beams at the vaguely familiar face, his disappointment momentarily forgotten in the excitement of finding someone he recognizes. He reaches out and shakes the man’s free hand heartily, while the man stares at him in surprised amusement
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Re: The Fair Belle [pt 8b/??]
anonymous
September 13 2010, 21:02:12 UTC
Wow Alfred is so cute.. and Francis is a little bit mysterious...
Don't need yo run away with shame !! This is a such a nice story and it's really a pleasure to see Alfred and Francis together, I think their very different personnalities fit ! I will wait for your next update !!!
The Fair Belle [pt 10/??]
anonymous
October 3 2010, 05:01:16 UTC
And yes, he has been in love before, long ago, he would fall in love every night and out of love the next morning, and he knows love hurts and that is why he wants to spare this young man from the pain. But those gorgeous blue eyes are looking at him, pleading, and he can not say no, as much as he needs to. He will hate himself for lying to Alfred again, but if the fact that he was a murderer didn’t scare him away
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The Fair Belle [pt 11/11]
anonymous
October 3 2010, 05:04:39 UTC
A week, then a month passes by in comfortable companionship, though Alfred eventually gets over his fear of ghosts, he still finds an excuse to sleep in the same bed. He even manages to enter the room without blushing too much, and while Frances never really leaves his mind, her absence doesn’t hurt as much as it used to. Every now and then, Alfred takes a job working as a spare cow hand for the cash, and when he gets home, Bonnefoy has made him his favorite meals. Their conversations over wine or whiskey are pleasant, and sometimes when they’ve had a bit too much, they tell each other outrageous lies and laugh and drink until they have to lean on each other to get upstairs to bed. Despite his being obviously French, Bonnefoy proves to be a wonderful friend and confidante, and Alfred thanks his lucky stars for this, even though he is not able to find the love of his life, at least he is not alone
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Re: The Fair Belle [pt 11/11]
anonymous
October 3 2010, 07:41:42 UTC
This is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading this. I love how they formed a quiet companionship before Alfred discovering about Francis' identity, and the ending is beautiful.
A--anon would really like to read a sequel from Francis' point of view, or a post-revelation sex scene orz;;;.
Re: The Fair Belle [pt 11/11]
anonymous
October 3 2010, 15:55:16 UTC
I'm glad you liked this, it was a little different from what I usually write and so it took me a while to figure everything out. If I ever get the chance, I would love to write a sequel. (Maybe this time I'd remember to use the right names, even, lol.)
Re: The Fair Belle [pt 11/11]
anonymous
October 3 2010, 22:05:45 UTC
I totally agree. The ending worked well, and it mostly ties everything up. But an epilougue or something would be even awesomer. Ah, Alfred, you are dense and it took you awhile to figure it out but you are so adorable. It's totally my head cannon that America is a hopeless romantic.
Re: The Fair Belle [pt 11/11]
anonymous
October 4 2010, 04:13:05 UTC
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it! I see that the vote is for a sequel, preferably a sexy one, though I'm not sure what else I can say about the plot. Any ideas? If I have time, I will consider writing it, as I love this pairing that much.
I totally agree with you about Alfred, he can be so stupidly adorable.
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Don't need yo run away with shame !! This is a such a nice story and it's really a pleasure to see Alfred and Francis together, I think their very different personnalities fit ! I will wait for your next update !!!
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A--anon would really like to read a sequel from Francis' point of view, or a post-revelation sex scene orz;;;.
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Ah, Alfred, you are dense and it took you awhile to figure it out but you are so adorable. It's totally my head cannon that America is a hopeless romantic.
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I totally agree with you about Alfred, he can be so stupidly adorable.
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