[Part 10] Poppy Seeds - China/England - 2/?
anonymous
April 26 2010, 19:58:58 UTC
“Not like this one. He wasn’t a docker or anything ‘cause he was too clean. He had big eyes and they weren’t squinty at all like my da says they are and he smelled nice and he said he never eats cats. He gave me coins too but they were funny-looking.”
“He spoke English? What did he look like?”
“He was,” the boy lowered his voice conspiratorially. “Handsome. But he was short for a grown-up. He let me touch his sleeves. I’ve never felt silk before
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[Part 10] Poppy Seeds - China/England - 8/?
anonymous
May 6 2010, 04:13:33 UTC
China stared at him, impassively. He was flaccid and though he'd pulled England into the position, the rest of his body leaned away. "Be a good boy and take another," he said. China's voice wasn't slurred at all despite the massive quantities he'd smoked
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[Part 10] Poppy Seeds - China/England - 9/10
anonymous
May 6 2010, 04:51:18 UTC
China concealed his pipe under his discarded robes. He opened his mouth again and resumed his pose. England snapped open the suspenders holding up the front of his trousers and then the smaller ones over his vest. He grabbed the hair at the back of China's head and forced his face up to look at him. China blinked and lowered his eyes. The blush remained on his face but he kept his mouth open wide, still doing a damn good impression of a slut despite his protests. England took his cock in his fist and guided it into China's mouth
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[Part 10] Poppy Seeds - China/England - 10/10
anonymous
May 6 2010, 04:52:10 UTC
England pulled the trousers away from China's body. He blanched at the expression on China's face but like everything these days, it was filtered through a red mist of rage and desire. With no other way to protect his modesty, China pressed his naked body into England's. His pupils were dilated and the shakes were running through all of his limbs. He was certainly in no fit state to fight back. England pushed him down. He curled up on his side with his knees raised and his hands covering his face.
"What are you going to do?" China said. His voice sounded so, so small.
England gathered up China's ripped clothes and dropped them on top of him. He tossed the box of matches and the pipe, so that they hit China's bare back.
"I'm going to leave you, like you wanted," he said. "You're a disgrace."
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anonymous
May 8 2010, 21:32:50 UTC
You have no idea how much I love this. They're such bastards to each other, which in of itself is nothing new, but the fact that they do so without pretenses or lying to each other! 8D The ending was so perfect and I loved this line too... England kneeled down in front of him. "Is it really that wrong to want beautiful things as my own?"
China's so needy and trying so hard not to be, and still saying such wise things while his addition is completely betraying him.
Amazing! I agree with the above anon that this is really powerful!
Re: [Part 10] Poppy Seeds - China/England - 10/10
anonymous
June 5 2010, 01:21:04 UTC
That was beautiful. The dialog and England's absolute deafness to China's words was gorgeous. And England is cruel and hiding himself behind his ego of superiority and rules when he is the root of it all.
"My addiction harms only myself. You're addicted to power and it harms everyone around you." Yes! This is exactly it and it's a such tidy summary of the events that surround the era of imperialism. This era is always such a sensitive issue for me because imperialism is so ugly and reveals the darkest parts of the soul. I think many imperialist nations hide that vile part of themselves behind their missionary facade.
Life between nations is all about power play, and this fill showed that there are always two sides.
Thanks for writing England like this, Author Anon! I sometimes worry that people in this fandom forget just how cruel and drunk on power Great Britain was. With a history like this, it's not difficult to see why China has pushed itself to the superpower position it sits in today.
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anonymous
November 8 2010, 00:16:32 UTC
ACK, AUTHOR!ANON
I'm a little late to the party but I want to tell you that this is one of my favorite fics...ever. EVER.
It's just so...I don't know. Sexy, yeah, but all the little details just create this fantastic WORLD that seems so real and AGHHHH. You clearly did your research - I applaud that. Your descriptions were just gorgeous and at the end I was disappointed that there wasn't more.
So...if you end up ever seeing this again, which I suppose you won't, I'd love to know if you've written anything else...
“He spoke English? What did he look like?”
“He was,” the boy lowered his voice conspiratorially. “Handsome. But he was short for a grown-up. He let me touch his sleeves. I’ve never felt silk before ( ... )
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"What are you going to do?" China said. His voice sounded so, so small.
England gathered up China's ripped clothes and dropped them on top of him. He tossed the box of matches and the pipe, so that they hit China's bare back.
"I'm going to leave you, like you wanted," he said. "You're a disgrace."
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England kneeled down in front of him. "Is it really that wrong to want beautiful things as my own?"
China's so needy and trying so hard not to be, and still saying such wise things while his addition is completely betraying him.
Amazing! I agree with the above anon that this is really powerful!
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They're too of my favourite characters. Man, I felt so mean writing this, lol.
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"My addiction harms only myself. You're addicted to power and it harms everyone around you."
Yes! This is exactly it and it's a such tidy summary of the events that surround the era of imperialism. This era is always such a sensitive issue for me because imperialism is so ugly and reveals the darkest parts of the soul. I think many imperialist nations hide that vile part of themselves behind their missionary facade.
Life between nations is all about power play, and this fill showed that there are always two sides.
Thanks for writing England like this, Author Anon! I sometimes worry that people in this fandom forget just how cruel and drunk on power Great Britain was. With a history like this, it's not difficult to see why China has pushed itself to the superpower position it sits in today.
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I'm a little late to the party but I want to tell you that this is one of my favorite fics...ever. EVER.
It's just so...I don't know. Sexy, yeah, but all the little details just create this fantastic WORLD that seems so real and AGHHHH. You clearly did your research - I applaud that. Your descriptions were just gorgeous and at the end I was disappointed that there wasn't more.
So...if you end up ever seeing this again, which I suppose you won't, I'd love to know if you've written anything else...
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